7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
在参加雅思考试时，雅思写作词汇的运用情况能够体现一位考生的英语水平，因此雅思写作词汇的运用是至关重要的，大多数考生都会出现在雅思写作过程中会出现运用同一个词汇的情况，这样就会降低考生对你的印象，那么雅思写作词汇如何才能灵活运用呢?
1). 做好词汇短语的积累工作。
考生有这样一个错误的想法，他们认为只要将参考书上的模板背过，再积累些论据，写作的问题就迎刃而解了。这里所说的积累并非死记硬背，而是通过将一个单词的不同形式，以及这个单词的同义表达等放在一起记忆就事半功倍。若遇到一个新词，脑海中就要出现有关它的信息，这样的话就能在考试这么短的时间中马上浮现了。仅仅一次的记忆是肯定不够的，所以要经常进行重复记忆。
2). 多看范文，对作文中出现的好的句型加以记忆。
考生再看范文是往往记住的都是范文的总体形势，对细节的词汇句型的运用并不太关注，所以教师在上课时也要合理安排时间，将一部分用在对词汇句型的讲解上。学生也要记录好词好句和其转换形式。
3). 加强练习。
经常有学生问，作文是不是多锻炼几篇就可以了，其实答案是否定的。
我这里所指的加强练习是在的基础之上的，即学生已经基本掌握了雅思写作的各项要求。那么这样练习才能有的放矢。通过几次的练习，能更加了解学生多样性的掌握情况，并对不足之处对症下药，了解不足处，在正式考试时可以取得好的成绩。
总体上来说在雅思写作中词汇能否灵活运用关系着你的作文是否条理清晰，用词准确以及句式多变等问题，通过上文新航道小编总结的"雅思写作词汇如何才能灵活运用"各位考生应该也有所领悟了 ，那么就让你的雅思写作词汇多样化吧，这样你的雅思写作分数也会有意想不到的变化哦。
雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
