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雅思总分7.5分要了解雅思考试的技巧!我在参加新航道的学习期间,新航道的老师们给我提供了许多应对雅思考试的技巧,经过一个雅思强化7分班的学习,我于12月9号参加了第二次雅思考试,取得了总分7.5分,听力8.5,阅读8分的成绩。下面,我和大家分享一下我在新航道学习过程中的心得体会。
总结
雅思听力和雅思阅读一般是比较容易得的两个板块。我个人的看法就是要多做真题
这两项是我比较薄弱的地方,也是我花了最多时间的科目。
雅思阅读
同学在考场上会很紧张,导致时间来不及,可能最后几个阅读题根本没有时间看,只能乱写几个,这样就可惜。所以平时就要多练,自己的速度。在新航道上过阅读课之后,老师教会了我很重要的一点,就是先看题目,分析题目,按题目类型来做。比如一般情况下,有填空题的话先做填空题,因为一般范围比较小,并且答案在原文中就有直接中找到。那么,主旨段落配对题呢就可以放在最后做。我觉得这种有选择性地做题可以节约不少时间,效率更高。所以我们要有针对性地去做题,而不是盲目按顺序来做。其次就是积累,英文题干里面经常出现原文中同义词的替换,平时做题的时候把这些替换都摘抄下来,做的多了,反应的速度能不少。
雅思听力
我感觉听懂不是最难的,最难的是那些绕弯子的还有单词填空的,别看那些填空的单词都不难,甚至是常用、基础的词,但是容易拼错!还有什么比听出来了但拼错了更让人痛心的呢?新航道的听力老师苏蕊在上课的时候就强调这个常见单词的拼写,在上课的时候会专门让我们听写。不少人会忽略这一点,但其实这对拿也关键的。
雅思口语
这两项是我比较薄弱的地方,也是我花了最多时间的科目。最根本的方法还是练习。在准备口语的过程中,新航道的口语老师教我学会归类,也就是把这些话题浓缩成一二十个,有些素材可以用来应对好几个题目,这样一来,练习的题目数量减少了,同一个素材的多方面练习,也会让你的内容更全面。当然,口语的练习还要录音,找出问题来,是语法、发音还是流利度存在问题,然后再针对问题继续练习,把你的表达不断地打磨。
雅思写作
另外一个就是作文,雅思的作文很注重逻辑,这也是我薄弱的。我觉得新航道的老师在讲授作文的过程中,的幽默风趣又讲的很清楚,把侧重点放在符合作题逻辑的培养上,能用很简洁的语言把一个知识点讲明白,不会觉得枯燥。


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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
