7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
雅思写作常用模板汇总!今天新航道小编为大家整理出一些雅思写作的常用模板,方便大家再平时练习中使用,但是小编也提醒大家要学会使用模板,这样才能拿到雅思写作。
1. There has been undesirable trend in recent years towards… A recent survey showed that…percent of respondents ranked…as their top priority, compared to…percent only a few years ago. Why do people fail to realize that…?
近年来出现对社会有害的……倾向。最近的一项调查表明,……的调查对象把……作为他们的,相比之下就在几年前,只有……的人这样想。为什么人们没能意识到……不能带来幸福呢?
2. I recently read a newspaper article on… The deplorable problem of…has aroused public concern nationwide。
最近我在报纸上读到一篇关于……的文章。……的问题令人深感遗憾,它已经引起全国公众的关注。
3. Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that…
根据现有的大量证据,我们是可以有把握地得出这样的结论:……
4.Along with the development of…, more and more…
随着……的发展,越来越多……
5.In the past few years, there has been a sharp growth/boom/decline in…
在过去几年内,……有显著增长/激增/明显滑坡……
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6.The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that…
提出的充分证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论:……
7.While the rhythm/pace/tempo of people’s living is speeding up, a lot of changes have taken place in…
人民生活节奏加快的同时,……也发生了变化。
8.With the fantastic spur both in industry and its economy in China, the number of…is on the rise
随着中国工业经济的迅猛发展,……的数目不断的上升。
9.It is commonly believed that the rise in…is the inevitable result of economic development。
大多数人们这样认为,……的增长是经济发展的必然结果。
10.In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in…
最近几年来,中国……有了惊人的增长。
小编今天就为大家整理出上面几个雅思模板句型,希望可以对大家有的帮助。

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(1)高中水平或雅思5分水平,基础薄弱的学生
(2)基础语法不完备,对雅思没有系统了解的学生
(3)即将进入雅思课程,希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生


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2.课程亮点
(1)1V1定制课程,基础到强化循序渐进。
(2)师资力量雄厚,升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
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(4)使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
(5)实体教学环境,沉浸式高效学习

课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
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英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型,目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握,考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。

英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习,每位学生能写出内容充实,在此基础上,掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧,写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。

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现报名可打八五折
(仅限前100名学员)
(1)课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估,量身打造课程,帮助学生充分完成课前预习
(2)课中导师双语沟通,进行雅思题型总结,对原版真题进行知识点精讲
(3)课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试,班主任线上线下24小时答疑

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.






