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年9月13日雅思考试小作文题目
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本场小作文范文
The table presents Australians’ visits to cinemas in 5 separate years, [注意：不是从1994年到2002年，而是分开的5年，这一点注意事项与9月8日的考试一样。] and in the line graph, Australians are divided into 4 age groups, each group’s average [此处为名词，平均数] of annual number of visits from 1994 to 2002 is shown.
In terms of the viewers’ proportion out of the whole Australian population, the year of 1998 stands out as the figure – 76 percent [同位语] – in that year was the highest. In the other 4 years, the percentage was within a narrow range of 68 to 72. As for the frequency, the approximate number of 11 times per year in 1994 and 1996 was obviously higher than the ones in the other 3 years.
To view Australians’ cinema visits by age, it [形式主语，指代后面that引导的名词性从句] is clear that [主语从句] the 14-24 group was most likely to watch movies in cinemas. What is also noteworthy is the constant fluctuations – up to 13 times and down to 9 times – during the period. With the increase of age, Australians’ interest in going to the cinema decreased, and the frequency was relatively stable in the three older groups, and it [不是形式主语，而是只带上一句中的主语] is particularly stable in the 50-plus group, where the annual number of visits was around 5.
Overall, variations are rather easy to notice between the years and between the 4 age groups. [不要出现数据，粗线条的概述整个图表，抓整体且突出重点]
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
