7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
新航道告诉你雅思写作如何复习!看似勤奋的学生在雅思写作中却拿不到，所以在复习的过程中要掌握复习方法，今天新航道小编就为大家讲讲雅思写作如何复习，为大家介绍一下雅思写作的复习方法。
1、要勤学苦练
雅思写作最主要的就是需要考生勤于思考、勤于动笔、勤于修改，考生在开始的时候是很不自信的，但实质上是自己不愿去动笔思考，写作如果不写肯定不能，加上已经工作，没有那么多时间复习和练习写作，而写作就是靠练，不好好练习写不好作文就越来越畏惧作文，所以需要改变了复习方式，以前通常是按照考试顺序，先练习听力然后阅读再是写作，这回考试我都是每天一大早开始写一篇大作文，先是手写然后敲到电脑上，在这个过程中其实已经修改过一遍了，而且能检查出不少错误，复习时间大概是考试前三周开始，到考试前十天基本上能做到一天一篇大作文两篇小作文，虽然因此听力和阅读练习的不够多但是因为基础还可以，最后的结果还是很满意的。
2、要找到老师批改
中国人和外国人看待问题的角度是不一样的，所以如果找到一个外教老师是能带来的作用很大，首先扭转了对作文好坏的评价标准，以前觉得好的、漂亮的大词、句式的重要性，但是从外教的批改中看出他们最看重的是基本的语法表达，考生都会个人存在的问题有两点：一是对一些基础语法掌握不透彻抓起来就随意用，例如the的用法和情态动词的用法被外教指出后有一种醍醐灌顶的感觉;二是滥用一些似是而非模棱两可但自以为很美的句式会被批评为表意不清，外教对作文结构也提了一些意见不需要太复杂简明易懂就行。
3、要留出时间检查
这和第1点讲到的多练也有关，一开始写一篇作文痛苦不花上1个小时就写不完，到后期可以在30分钟内完成一篇完整的作文。在考场上速度是关键最后留出5分钟将两篇作文都好好看一遍，能检查出不少语法错误或拼写错误。而雅思最重要的不是写作的高度和深度，而是准确度。
以上就是小编为大家介绍的关于雅思写作如何复习的相关内动，希望大家可以从中受益不断地自己的写作能力，争取让自己在雅思写作中取得优异的成绩。
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雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
