无锡市锡山区雅思培训学校介绍,《剑14》Test 3 大作文范文解析，抽象话题到底该咋写?

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无锡市锡山区雅思培训学校介绍,《剑14》Test 3 大作文范文解析，抽象话题到底该咋写?
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

《剑14》Test 3 大作文题目

　　Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　抽象话题，其实很难。写不好就是“天上飘”。

　　考过类似的话题是关于“whether sports can bring together people of different cultures and ages together”。

　　对于抽象话题，如何“接地气”是关键。

　　写作范文及解析

　　带着立场写开头，信息节奏快，废话压缩到最少 → Music is a good way of connecting people, for example, Europeans and the Chinese or the older and the younger. 接下来，可能是一句“套话”→ Although some people might disagree, this is the truth.

　　To begin with, of a song, the lyrics may be incomprehensible because of the language in which the song is written, the melody is linguistically neutral. ← 一旦出现“天上飘”的概念，就需要立即用“接地气”的方式解释清楚： As a matter of fact, a listener does not need to understand the language of the lyrics to feel the melody. As a result, the music is likely to excite or to melt the listeners regardless of whether they speak the language or grow up in the culture in which the music is produced. ← “小词”的使用特别值得被注意。精简的一句话的例子来作为论证的必要补充 → In other words, an American may be fond of a Chinese song, and a British musician may have a large population of Asian fans. 遇上抽象话题的时候，会举例子替代怎么也说不清的道理就很关键。 Both cases illustrate that music is the common ground between different cultures and the shared interest between people from the different cultures.

　　In addition, no ageism could be found in the world of music. Admittedly, older generations may have musical preferences different from those of younger generations. However, there is no fine division, and the boundaries are blurred. It is not surprising that a young individual likes the nostalgic feel of songs written decades ago or unbelievable that a middle-aged person enjoys the music that seems to attract only the teenage demographic. 精简的一句话的例子来作为论证的必要补充→ For example, during festival seasons in particular, a whole family, three generations of members, gathered, sing and dance by the same song with plenty of heartful joy. 遇上抽象话题的时候，会举例子替代怎么也说不清的道理就很关键。

　　In light of all the cases above, music brings together people of different cultures and ages. This is so true that the few exceptions do not matter. ← 结尾段落同样需要信息节奏快，废话压缩到最少。

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

年7月17雅思大作文题目

　　Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.

　　【解析】

　　integral part 不可或缺的部分

　　censure 谴责v.

　　one-sided 片面的adj.

　　Body Paragraph 1

　　The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.

　　【解析】

　　ascribe … to … 归咎于

　　marketing pitch 市场营销

　　entice 怂恿 v.

　　on impulse 一时冲动

　　Body Paragraph 2

　　To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.

　　【解析】

　　evoke 唤醒 v.

　　psychological appeals

　　controversy 争议 n.

　　Body Paragraph 3

　　My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.

　　【解析】

　　introduce 引入v.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.

　　【解析】

　　prepare a ground for 为…打基础

　　affirm 断言v.

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