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万事开头难,对于作文来说也是一样的,一个好的开头,可以稳定军心,让自己在考场上越写越沉着;也可以给考官留下一个好印象,这点可是重要的。
今天,小编就给大家分享一个观点类作文的开头思路,解决考生的燃眉之急。
观点类作文,顾名思义,要求你对某一个问题发表观点,并有逻辑地论述你所持观点的理由,并给出相应事例来支持你的理由。
观点类作文是大家在雅思考试中最常遇到的。人对于观点类作文都会打怵,不知道如何下笔,不知道如何论述自己的观点,甚至连自己应该持哪方观点都不知道。
在雅思中,我们常见的提问方式是对于一个问题或现象,问考生:
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
对于此类问题,考生需要做的件事就是给出结论。换句话说,在被问到观点的时候,考生要先明确地选择一个观点。
有的考生可能要问,那我应该是agree还是disagree呢?答案是都可以。由于雅思、托福以及其他英语考试,归根结底都是语言考试,考察的是考生的语言运用能力,价值观并不在考察范围内。所以应该选择自己展开论述时比较舒服,事例充分的一方观点。
我们以一道雅思大作文题目为例:
Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这道题中,题干给出的观点是有人说艺术学科在高中阶段不应该作为必修科目,你对这个观点在何种程度上表示同意或者反对?
我们先来分析一下这个题目的主要矛盾。显然,争论的焦点在于艺术学科是否应该作为必修科目,这里的双方观点可以分为:
A、必修
B、不必修
由于题干的观点是不应该作为必修,所以,考生在选边站的时候,如果我赞成必修,那我就应该disagree with the argument;如果我不赞成必修,那我就应该agree with the argument。
现在小编选择站在不赞成必修的一方来写开头。
句,我要复述一下题干问题存在的背景,这一步也叫paraphrase;
第二句,我要提出一个问题来引出题干所探讨的主要矛盾;
第三句,我要回答第二句的问题,从而明确给出我所持的观点,这个观点也就是本文的主旨。
Art subjects have made their way into the curriculum of high school. However, does this mean that the subjects, such as painting and drawing, should become compulsory for students? In this essay, I will argue that we should not treat the art courses as mandatory in high school.
那如果我想持赞成必修的观点呢?其实很简单,只需要把最后一句话的not去掉即可。
总之观点类作文先要对题干进行复述,然后针对题干的观点对正反两面提出问题,最后就是要明确自己的立场。希望可以帮助到各位,有其他疑问也可以到官网进行咨询。
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
