7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
2021年4月29雅思大作文题目
The best way to improve road transport safety is to let the drivers test each year.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Road safety is certainly an important issue, which is linked to not only the drivers but everyone else on the road. To improve safety, there is a list of ways, and my firm conviction is that testing drivers each year does not have much of a role to play in this.
解析
Ø 本题是一道绝 对题，涉及到关键词“the best way”，拿到这类题站“disagree”一方会比较好写
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To some extent, periodic re-testing works. 总分< Since most drivers seek a license at a young age, they may have let their guard down now on the road. Think about that: walking in front of a less-than-properly-skilled driver with vague memory about railroad crossing signals, the risk of an accident is certainly not low. In this case, taking the test and associated courses is a way of refreshing their memories with the latest driving laws and regulations. 转折< However, it is far from the best way.
解析
Ø 考驾照肯定有用，但它并不是的方法。
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支撑解释1< Whether the government could provide enough testing capacity is the first question. To meet the need, it seems pressing to build a huge amount of examination sites and equip more staff, which is quite money-consuming and thus unfeasible. 支撑解释2< Even if the government manages to do this, there is another worry: people would be weary of test preparation. They need to spend months a year reciting theoretical knowledge and practicing driving, and this is quite energy-consuming.
解析
Ø 本段开始质疑“年年驾考”的可行性
1. 政府能够提供足够的考试名额吗?
2. 人们是不是每年都要耗费大量的精力考试?
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Rather, the government can use other ways to improve roadway safety, such as harsh punishment and modern road design. 总分< Zero tolerance for transgressing drivers helps, which would see fewer of them drink-driving and more of them yielding to pedestrians. Road designs, including more roundabouts, adequate street lighting, and separated sidewalks for pedestrians, traffic lanes for drivers, are all effective approaches to reduce collisions and injuries.
解析
Ø 本段提出更合适的两大措施
1. 对违规司机“零容忍”
2. 道路设计
Conclusion
In conclusion, asking drivers to take driving tests yearly would go some way to improve road safety, but it is too unfeasible for the government to conduct. Therefore, I tend to think that safety depends more on enacting stricter punishments on those who offend driving laws and on redesigning roads.
解析
Ø 总结上文
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
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The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
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To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
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My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
