7月31日雅思大作文示范写作 | 食物为什么跋山涉水而来?
2021年8月7雅思大作文题目
Some people believe that children have the freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
范文及解析
Introduction
For children’s upbringing, some reckon that adults, especially parents, should avoid them from making mistakes, while I tend to harbour the view that teenagers should not be totallyshackled.
【解析】教育类大话题：孩子是否有自由犯错?在一定限制条件之下，允许孩子试错，只要不走极端即可，如青少年犯罪。法律道德是基本底线。
Ø shackle vt. 束缚，阻挠，羁绊〔含贬义〕(用带有情感色彩的词，加强自己的立场)
Body 1
Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate that guardians’ intervention is indispensable to some extent, since they are constitutionally responsible for their children’s growth. Smart parents understand that it cannot count solely on their kids, who, though indeed have the freedom, are too young to distinguish right from wrong, and that external conditions, adults’ advice and supervision, are needed. Therefore, mature adults, particularly parents, steps in and utilises their power. For instance, guardians may put a cap on what kind of video games teenagers play or what sorts of people adolescents make friends with in case those immature children get addicted to games containing too much violence or, even worse, sunk into gangs, which consequently render them off the right life track.
【解析】让步：从法律层面说，家长有责任防止孩子走上歧路，避免其受到不可逆的伤害，毕竟大多数孩子不够成熟，不能明辨是非。
Ø guardian n. [律]监护人
Ø intervention n. 干预(褒)
Ø constitutionally adv. 合乎宪法地
Ø count solely on 仅仅只依赖于
Ø distinguish right from wrong 明辨是非
Ø step in v. 介入
Ø put a cap on v. 限制
Ø off the right life track 偏离人生正轨
Body 2
However, apart from the aforementioned cases, too much interference on children’s making mistakes may incur repercussions running counter to adults’ expectation. More accurately, since most young children are to some degree rebellious, they are less likely to follow every piece of advice from adults, especially when the strict supervision develops into excessive control. Not surprisingly, this may fuel children’s grumble and push them to make mistakes instead. In fact, children should be allowed to learn from experiences. As long as young individuals are well-instructed, they are highly likely to learn from their mistakes about how to tell right from wrong, to take all factors into consideration before making decisions, and toreflect upon and correct themselves.
【解析】除去以上的极端情况，孩子应该有自由在一定条件下试错。从未成年人的特性出发，大多数孩子可能比较叛逆，一味地阻止可能适得其反。从试错中让孩子学会如何辨别是非，如何做决定前考虑周到，如何在犯错后及时弥补，远比家长直接介入更加令孩子印象深刻。
Ø interference n. 干涉(贬义)
Ø incur v. 导致(贬义)
Ø repercussion n. 后果(通常贬义)
Ø fuel vt. 加剧
Ø grumble n. 抱怨
Ø reflect upon oneself 反省
Conclusion
To recapitulate, children should overall learn to be responsible for their own decisions.
【解析】重申观点
Ø recapitulate v. 总结
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7月31日雅思大作文示范写作 | 食物为什么跋山涉水而来?
年7月31雅思大作文题目
Today some food travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers.
Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?
解析
“如今，一些食物跋山涉水直接从农场到达消费者手里，为什么?这是否积极?”
首先，为什么要舍近求远呢?原因可能涉及到本地不产、本地产出不够、外地价格便宜等
其次，实现远距离运输，又涉及到食物的保存和运输，那我们可以考虑运输成本、保存技术等因素
第二部分表态积极与否：稍作让步，大头写积极。
远距离运输可能对环境有影响，但，运输产生的碳排放其实远少于生产过程的碳排放。
且，食物进口能满足消费者需求，提供高质量产品，又能推动经济发展。
写作示范
Introduction
With international trade increasing greatly over the past few decades, now supermarkets can source foods from farms thousands of miles away. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I think this is a desirable trend.
Body Paragraph 1
分析原因
The first reason why we import food is that demand fuels supply. To explain, as food tastes become more international, consumers seek a more diverse food supply that is simultaneously tasteful and affordable. Western people, for example, have an increasing demand for Asian cuisines. These foods, if produced in countries where labor and production costs are just a fraction of those in their homegrown counterparts, are often sold at lower prices, which has further made food imports a desirable decision. Another reason is the increasingly efficient modes of transport, including sea freight, road and rail transportation, and air freight, with which food can travel between continents and reach consumers’ tables within just one day.
Body Paragraph 2
分析利弊
Some people are criticizing food imports for, on the face of it, long-distance transportation generates great quantities of carbon dioxide emissions, but it is production emissions but not transport ones that dominate food emissions. I would argue that there are more positive impacts. Most directly, importing food enables people to access more high-quality choices. The quality is safeguarded as regulations on these foods are usually so strict that only the best ones can end up on the market. Not only that, but both importing and exporting create more available jobs such as intermediaries and haulers, boosting the economy on a global level.
Conclusion
In conclusion, to meet consumers’ demand for foods of more varieties, some food now travels thousands of miles to consumers, and the efficient means of transport has made this possible. As an indispensable part of our current food system, the food of long-distance travel benefits both consumers and the global economy.
