雅思写作知识点分析(第101期)
2021年8月14雅思大作文题目
An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry.
Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
写作示范
Introduction
Of late, more and more developing countries are joining the wave of tourism development. I tend to think that they do so based on their fragile state of the economy, and to both the local population and the government, it is a favorable decision.
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分析原因
The primary reason why developing countries expand their tourist industry is the small investment it requires. By exploiting the potential 开发潜能of tourism, which mainly refers to natural scenery and historical remains, these countries can rapidly integrate into 加入 the international economy. In comparison, following the traditional path of industrialization, to them, would be too demanding 要求过高 in both capital 资本 and solid technological strength科技力量. Besides, tourism is hugely rewarding 回报巨大. Without much investment, it can be a starting point for local economic take-off 经济起飞, as a constant flow of tourists can contribute to the destination countries with payment on recreation equipment and other daily expenses here.
解析
Ø 分析发展中国家的这种作为时,一定要扣紧“发展中国家”这个关键词,我们所理解的这类国家是不是经济不够发达?科技较为落后?那么对它们来说,发展旅游业(投资小回报大)是加快发展的首 选项目无疑了。
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分析利弊
Indeed, the flow of tourists may multiply 使成倍增长the requirements of improving infrastructure, augmenting the burden on 加重负担under developing countries. However, I believe that expanding tourism is more likely to be positive. Apart from the revenue, the positive impact can be strongly felt in terms of employment for locals. Scenic spots, transport, hotels, and restaurants all generate jobs where they are needed the most, which can improve the quality of life for people in this area. From a larger scale, with international connections promoted, these developing countries can leverage 利用 them to bridge more business collaborations with others in the long run, thus accelerating their development to catch up with other advanced countries.
解析
Ø 分析发展中国家发展旅游业的利弊时,首先是人流量大时,可能对当地政府(经济实力不足)有一定的要求。
但毕竟利大于弊,经济发展的同时能提供就业并促成长远的国际合作。
Conclusion
In conclusion, expanding the tourist industry to developing countries is a wise decision because of the low investment and the handsome profits. Not only that, but tourism can benefit individuals in employment and the government in international cooperation.
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雅思写作知识点分析(第101期)
应对
In many countries, it is convenient for people to buy a variety of food from all over the world.
To what extent do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?
这道题时
考生如此设计了一段结构
There are two main reasons why being able to buy food from around the world is advantageous. Firstly, it gives people the opportunity to eat a wider range of different kinds of foods. …(此处为论证) Additionally, it is good for the customers’ health as they can take in different kinds of nutrients. …(此处为论证)
☆ 谨慎使用代词
改写如下
… Additionally, eating a wider range of food is beneficial because it means that people consume a wider variety of nutrients.
☆ 先看原文,firstly之后使用了it,这个it是清晰可理解的,指代“being able to buy food from around the world”。那么additionally后面的it呢?考生的本意当然还是指代“being able to buy food from around the world”,然而,在句子中穿插了论证的前提下,我们很难做到“隔山打牛”啦!为免歧义,不如直接将其指代的内容换个措辞写出来吧~
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