9月4日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 无人驾驶汽车到底好还是不好？
非数据图：地图
主要描述“比较”，也可以理解为“变化”
“现在VS将来”，注意时态
Introduction
Shown in the two maps are the present floor plan of Southwest Airport and the development plan of it. Overall, the airport after the development will be moderately different. 第 一句划线部分是一个倒装形式，当成套话记住。提醒注意：动词的单复数由后面的内容决定。第二句话陈述图的宏观情况。通常说来，就是说一下区别的程度，或者变化的程度。
Body
主体部分有三种写法：上帝视角(平面图);访客视角(视线图/线路图);混合视角。
老章这里决定用“混合视角”写作。用这个视角写作时注意：用将来去比较于现在(而不要先写现在再写将来)，这样可能省字省劲：The most conspicuous difference is the 10 more gates on top of the existing 8 gates, and those additional ports are the extensions of the airport, making the airport larger. Accordingly, the present walkway, which transports the passengers to the gates, will be replaced with a sky train.
写完外部区别后，到下一段去写内部。这样通过份段来引导读者的写作思路是很讨读者喜欢的： The main part of the terminal building will have moderate changes only in its interior. First, both the entrance and the exit will have two doors. Second, departing visitors will see a bag ｄｒｏｐ area where the check-in zone currently is, and the check-in zone will be moved across the hall and against the east wall. Accordingly, the café will be relocated, and visitors will find it in the southwestern corner and in the immediate vicinity of the entrance. Another addition is the shops in the waiting lounge behind the customs. 注意老章已经在这一段刻意覆盖了常规各种可能的句子主语/句子开头。通过丰富句子主语/开头来丰富句子的形式是语法得分的重点。当然，黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。
In the hall of arrivals will also be a few more facilities. Arriving visitors passing the customs would look to their left-hand side for a café and an ATM on their way out.By the exit, car rental – another addition for visitors’ convenience – will be available in a small extension. 第 一句划线部分是一个倒装形式：说明方位的介宾短语置于句首时的主系倒装。同样黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。
Conclusion
In light of all the changes, Southwest Airport will have greater capacity and become more functional. 只要开头段有了对于图的总述，其实结尾段可以没有。但是老章还是写出来给参考和以后别的作文提示。
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9月4日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 无人驾驶汽车到底好还是不好？
年9月4雅思大作文题目
It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本周的考题是《剑桥16》上的一道真题， 之前，我们也发布过这道真题的范文，所以，各位考生可要多多关注剑桥真题啦!
高分范文及解析
01、The automotive industry is witnessing game-changing development, and this revolutionary change lies in the galloping of the driverless technology. As modern as they may look, those driverless vehicles are unexciting and rattling overall. (33 words)
解析
Ø 将题目中的cars，buses and trucks概括为automotive industry。在开头段落清晰表明全文的主要观点，无人驾驶总体而言令人不安。
* automotive 汽车的
* game-changing 变革性的
* revolutionary 革命性的
* gallop 快速发展(不及物动词)
* rattling 使人不安的
02、Safety issues are the immediate concern. There have been reports about the malfunction of the Artificial Intelligence technology installed on the vehicles. There have also been reports about humans and AI struggling for the control over the steering wheel and the pedals. Those reports make quite a few people suspicious of whether the driverless technology is solid and reliable. As a matter of fact, this hazard is never officially negated, thereby remaining as the biggest drawback of this driverless technology. (80 words)
解析
Ø 主体第 一段提出无人驾驶最 大的缺点，即安全问题。安全问题里面又涉及两个具体的理由。主体段开头一般是比较概括性的句子，不需要写太长，一上来就太长读起来也会比较费劲。
* immediate 当前的
* malfunction 故障(可数名词)
* install 安装，安置(及物动词)
* struggle 争夺(不及物动词，通常和for连用，struggle with sb for sth)
* quite a few 很多
* suspicious 不信任的，持有怀疑态度的(通常和of连用)
* solid 可靠的
* hazard 危险(可数名词)
* negate 否认(及物动词)
03、The deprivation of the fun of driving is another disappointment. The exciting “the sheer fun of driving” slogan may no longer be seen, and completely automatic cars (different from cars with the automatic gear) can hardly be exciting for a considerable number of male drivers, who finally are able to afford a nice car they have always wanted since their youth. What they want is the sense of coolness created by their skillful manipulation of the cars rather than the ease. The hands-off experience is certainly undesirable. (89 words)
解析
Ø 主体第二段提出无人驾驶的第二个缺点，中间使用举例论证。头尾两个短句，中间两个长难句，形成一种错落有致的感觉。
* deprivation 剥夺
* disappointment 令人失望的事/人(可数名词)
* automatic 自动的
* considerable 很大的
* sense of coolness 酷
* skillful 熟练的
* manipulation 操作
* ease舒适，安逸(不可数名词)
* hands-off 放手的
* undesirable 不想要的
04、In fairness, the driverless technology is a groundbreakingadvance. At present, its development and application have afforded convenience and created economic benefits. Cars with this technology are easy to park and alert human drivers to potential collisions. Other vehicles using this technology are being used in more and more settings, such as airport shuttle buses and trains, and accordingly there have been reductions in the labor cost. (89 words)
解析
Ø 第三主体段是折中段。之前两段都是在讲无人驾驶的缺点，这一段简单题一下优点，文章看起来更有批判性。
* in fairness 公平地说
* groundbreaking 革新的
* advance 进步
* application 运用(可数名词)
* afford 提供(及物名词)
* alert 使警惕(及物名词，常和to连用，alert sb to do sth，alert sb to sth)
* collision 碰撞事故(可数名词)
05、Overall, the driverless technology will eventually reach a high level of accuracy, precision and sophistication. But now the faults are evident, and the merits are less so. (27 words)
解析
Ø 结尾段概括总结，不需要细写。再次点明主旨，就目前为止，无人驾驶的问题还是显而易见的。
*accuracy 准确度(不可数名词)
* precision 精确度(不可数名词)
* sophistication 成熟度(不可数名词)
* fault 缺点(可数名词)
* evident 显而易见的
* merit 优点(可数名词)
