雅思小作文真题范文：地图1|比较关系的混合视角
2021年9月26雅思大作文题目
Some people think technological development can reduce crime, while others think it actually encourages crime.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
高分范文及解析
01、Many may say, and I agree, that crime has fallen dramatically these days due to breakthroughs in technology. Yet, I am also convinced of the connection between them and the occurrence of certain crimes.
02、It is irrefutable that the latest technology can deter some would-be wrong-doers. They, for example the drivers or domestic abusers, may think twice before running a stoplight or inflicting harm on families to avoid being captured and sent to prison, thanks to the installation of digital cameras everywhere. The surveillance also makes it much easier to track suspects. Not only that, but law enforcement agencies are harnessing big data and analytic tools to predict where and when different types of crimes may occur. In this way, more police forces now are patrolling in high-risk areas, which ensures them to halt and eradicate crimes more effectively. (科技进步首先能震慑潜在罪犯：如摄像头的存在作用;大数据分析同时还能预判犯罪行为的高发地，从而提高办案效率。)
解析
* irrefutable 无可辩驳的
* deter would-be wrong-doer威慑潜在的不法分子
* inflict harm on 对…施加伤害
* installation 安装
* surveillance 监控，监视
* track suspects 追踪嫌疑犯
* harness 利用
* patrol 巡逻
* halt 制止
* eradicate 消除
03、However, to a certain extent, advancement in technology opens more opportunities for criminals. Take the Internet as an example. Its anonymity and billions of active users daily make it a playground for potential online criminals, who unscrupulously steal others’ private information, such as bank account and phone number, online. Much of this eventually evolves into cyber fraud. In addition, the lack of money is one of the chief culprits shepherding people to commit crimes. With this in mind, should technology proliferate, more people may be desperate, because it allows for the replacement of human workers. Then, it is not difficult to understand why they end up being outlaws. (网络的匿名性和大量的活跃用户使网络诈骗频发;科技的进步在逐步取代人工，而失业会致使人犯罪。)
解析
* open opportunities 提供机会
* anonymity 匿名性
* unscrupulously 无道德原则地
* evolve into 演变为
* chief culprit 罪魁祸首
* shepherd 诱使
* unscrupulously
* proliferate 扩散
* be desperate 铤而走险
* outlaw 亡命之徒
04、In conclusion, technological development is not merely the crime stopper as it seems. It seems to me that realizing and avoiding the adverse impacts are equally essential.
英语雅思培训
英语是当今世界上主要的国际通用语言这一，也是世界上最广泛使用的语言。
开课啦
英语雅思高效培训班是讲师团历经数年，潜心打磨出来的一款新媒体运营爆款课程，行业众多大咖共同定制，课程由浅入深，从理论到时间，充分调动学员热情在线直播授课。
上课方式
①在线直播教学
②在线点评互动和课后答疑
③全程辅导的教学模式
课程内容大纲
①语音：能用国际音标和基本读音规则正确拼读单词，朗读时语音、语调基本正确。
②语音：能用国际音标和基本读音规则正确拼读单词，朗读时语音、语调基本正确。
③语法：进一步巩固和加深基本语法知识并能运用所学语法知识解决阅读翻译中的问题
④说的能力：能进行简单的日常会话，能根据所学的教材内容进行问答和复述。
纯正地道口语
10000多位全球外籍教师团队，来自美国、英国、菲律宾等国家，具有国际专业英语教学资格认证及各行业工作背景。根据中国学生的特点，甄选多年执教经验的优秀外教给每一位学习者带来互动式学习体验，能够采取各类有针对性的教学方式。
超高的性价比
精选8大英语雅思课程类别，包含近百门主推精品课程，可以满足各个年龄群学习的需求，且课程性价比超高，不超过40元/节，质优价廉保证每一个家庭都能负担得起
雅思小作文真题范文：地图1|比较关系的混合视角
非数据图：地图
主要描述“比较”，也可以理解为“变化”
“现在VS将来”，注意时态
Introduction
Shown in the two maps are the present floor plan of Southwest Airport and the development plan of it. Overall, the airport after the development will be moderately different. 第 一句划线部分是一个倒装形式，当成套话记住。提醒注意：动词的单复数由后面的内容决定。第二句话陈述图的宏观情况。通常说来，就是说一下区别的程度，或者变化的程度。
Body
主体部分有三种写法：上帝视角(平面图);访客视角(视线图/线路图);混合视角。
老章这里决定用“混合视角”写作。用这个视角写作时注意：用将来去比较于现在(而不要先写现在再写将来)，这样可能省字省劲：The most conspicuous difference is the 10 more gates on top of the existing 8 gates, and those additional ports are the extensions of the airport, making the airport larger. Accordingly, the present walkway, which transports the passengers to the gates, will be replaced with a sky train.
写完外部区别后，到下一段去写内部。这样通过份段来引导读者的写作思路是很讨读者喜欢的： The main part of the terminal building will have moderate changes only in its interior. First, both the entrance and the exit will have two doors. Second, departing visitors will see a bag ｄｒｏｐ area where the check-in zone currently is, and the check-in zone will be moved across the hall and against the east wall. Accordingly, the café will be relocated, and visitors will find it in the southwestern corner and in the immediate vicinity of the entrance. Another addition is the shops in the waiting lounge behind the customs. 注意老章已经在这一段刻意覆盖了常规各种可能的句子主语/句子开头。通过丰富句子主语/开头来丰富句子的形式是语法得分的重点。当然，黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。
In the hall of arrivals will also be a few more facilities. Arriving visitors passing the customs would look to their left-hand side for a café and an ATM on their way out.By the exit, car rental – another addition for visitors’ convenience – will be available in a small extension. 第 一句划线部分是一个倒装形式：说明方位的介宾短语置于句首时的主系倒装。同样黄色高亮的部分是值得注意和记忆的名词、动词、方位词。
Conclusion
In light of all the changes, Southwest Airport will have greater capacity and become more functional. 只要开头段有了对于图的总述，其实结尾段可以没有。但是老章还是写出来给参考和以后别的作文提示。
