10月16日雅思大作文真题范文 | 国际援助对发展中国家重要吗?
英语听、说、读、写的实际运用能力是基础，直接决定学生去国外听不听得懂课、能不能跟上国外学习节奏、能不能打理好基本的学业和生活。所以，一定要打造坚固的“金字塔塔基”，最好是在国内搞定雅思成绩，掌握基本的英语语言技能，留学海外才能够如鱼得水。
雅思写作
雅思写作注重辩证理念，行于所当行、止于所不可不止，内外兼修、有理有据，谋篇、布局、遣词、造句一气呵成。大小作文的形式对中国学生来说并不陌生，但是输出观点、地道表达却是一大挑战。
写作考试的基本信息：
No.1
考试时间
考试时长共60分钟，完成两篇作文，任务1和任务2。任务1一般要求写一篇不少于150个单词的作文，建议20分钟完成;任务2一般要求写一篇不少于约250个单词的作文，建议40分钟完成。
No.2
任务1考试说明及评分标准
这部分一般要求考生写一篇不少于150个单词的短文，描述所给的一个图表(流程图、示意图、柱状图、曲线图、饼图、表格等)。比如，描述一个欧洲城市分别在1950、1970和1990年中各种交通车辆的运营情况。
任务1主要从完成要求、连贯与衔接、词汇、句法等方面进行评分。
5.0分或5.0分以下的作文一般语法错误较多;6.0分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误，用词和用句基本准确;
7.0分以上的作文一般用词丰富、句子结构复杂。
雅思写作任务1取得6.0分，对应的写作水准，参考如下：
No.3
任务2考试说明及评分标准
一般要求考生写一篇不少于250个单词的短文。考生需要分析问题并解决问题，对某个观点发表支持或反对意见，讨论利弊等，如“科学技术的发展将使传统文化丧失，这是不可避免的。科学技术与传统文化是不能共存的。你同意或不同意这个观点?请为你的回答提供论据”。
下表列出了年和年各种话题类型出现的次数，通过数据分析，大家可以直观感受一下。
雅思写作任务2取得6.0分，对应的写作水准，参考如下：
No.4
考试要点
①谋篇布局：逻辑清晰，起承转合严谨，解决重点问题。
②遣词造句：用词个性，句子结构多样，语法准确。
③主题明确：每段写一个主题，主题句简洁清晰，论证充实。
④过渡自然：注意句与句，段与段的过渡与衔接。
No.5
备考建议
①押题虽好，不会写仍然是浪费时间。
许多考生在考前倾向于去了解“最会考的题目”，并且死记硬背押题范文，而考试官方最忌讳这种行为。建议各位考生不要投机取巧，解决逻辑衔接和语言表达能力才是关键。
②小作文不动笔等于没学。
建议各位考生考前至少练习写8篇小作文，才能保证自己熟练运用所学的数据归纳方法和词汇句型。考前一周的练习最好限时完成。
③先“审题”再成文。
多数写作分数卡在5.5分的“烤鸭们”主要问题还是对于考题内容并没有回应清楚，并伴有语法错误。因此，建议大家落笔之前先确定审清题目，回应题目问题而写的作文才可以拿高分。
No.6
搞定雅思写作的绝招就一个字——练
写作，尤其是规定时间内的英文写作，是大多数中国学生的痛点。雅思写作既需要准确理解题目，具有批判性思维，有理有据，又需要句式多样，词汇丰富，起承转合严谨顺畅，内容和形式都有所讲究，这让很多同学望而却步。必须有大量的语言输入，才能进行有效的语言输出，“烂笔头”的功夫要狠狠下。
大量的语言输入。输入主要是指广泛且大量的阅读，读经典内容、专业内容、趣味性内容，到各类英文语境中感受语言的力量。“读书破万卷， 下笔如有神”，写作正是一个博观而约取、厚积而薄发的过程。
有效的语言输出，正如：“纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行。”看得再多，不动笔，一定出不来好文章。英文写作更需要勤加练习，写作后请专业老师批改，一遍遍针对性练习，直至对作文的谋篇布局、遣词造句都能保证质量和速度。
经常有考生问老师：“雅思写作有没有提分的诀窍?哪怕提0.5分也可以，我就差0.5分。”答案就一个字：练!一篇篇地练，一个个文本类型练。新航道学员有专门的写作作业要求和专业老师作文批改。即使考生没有写作天赋，也完全可以通过专业老师的写作训练和大量的学习积累取得理想的写作分数。
雅思写作练习需要多动笔，勤总结，训练定力和耐力，这不仅可以提高写作分数，更是为将来出国打下扎实的写作基本功。
雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
10月16日雅思大作文真题范文 | 国际援助对发展中国家重要吗?
年10月16雅思大作文题目
Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
高分范文及解析
(交代背景)It is fortunate that in the modern era many international organizations exist to aid developing countries. (复述题目)Yet some debate exists over whether aid should be given in the form of financial support or through practical aid and advice. (作者立场)I am of the opinion that practical aid and advice is far more beneficial to developing countries in the long run than simply giving parcels of monetary support.
(让步)I concede that financial aid can be tremendously beneficial to developing nations in certain circumstances. For instance, some countries lack necessary resources in order to build vital infrastructure. Only through the purchase of industrial capital such as machinery and raw materials can such countries improve their conditions, but such purchases require large sums of money. International organizations can donate money or offer special loans in order to facilitate these purchases and aid a nation’s development.(转折) Yet this is only a very short term solution, for after acquiring the raw materials tremendous expertise is required to maintain such systems so that they do not fall into disrepair. Thus, financial is not necessarily more important than practical aid and advice.
(作者立场论证)There are many ways in which practical aid and advice is superior to mere financial support. Advisors from more developed nations can teach at schools and universities in order to spread expert knowledge to people in a developing country so that a sustainable base of professionals can be established. Furthermore, practical aid in the form of establishing business relationships and supply chains may strengthen a developing country’s ability to become self-reliant and grow independent of financial support. Finally, practical aid and advice is less likely to be squandered and exploited as financial aid is in some less developed countries that may have corruption.
(复述作者立场&总结分论点)Ultimately, when international organizations give money to developing nations as a form of aid, it is merely a temporary bandage on a much larger issue, which is the lack of vital knowledge and infrastructure. (总结分论点)Aid in the form of teaching and improving practical areas of a country’s economy is a more beneficial form of aid.
年10月14雅思大作文题目
People who damage public property, such as buildings or statues should have to do community service (such as cleaning parks) as a punishment rather than other forms of punishment (such as paying a fine or going to prison)
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
高分范文及解析
(交代背景)In an increasingly urbanized world, the destruction of public property such as buildings or statues has increased significantly over the years. (复述题目)Some people have suggested that the punishment for such a crime should be community service, while others have argued for more traditional punishments such as fines or jailtime. (作者立场)I believe that the extent of damage and the vandal’s personal circumstances should determine the kind of punishment.
(作者立场论证)In the case of minor damage, or a vandal who is incapable of making financial reparations or has a family to support, community service may be a suitable punishment. For instance, if people have spray-painted graffiti on a wall, making them clean it up could be a proper way of reprimanding them. Similarly, if people are caught littering, having them pick up trash from the streets for a period of time can rectify their behavior. It would be senseless or cruel to send such people to jail or place a financial burden upon them.
(让步)However, in the event that a piece of important public property is destroyed, consequences must be more severe. For example, if a historic statue is damaged, then the cost of repair should be borne by the vandal. If a reckless driver collides with a fire hydrant and destroys it, leading to a waste of resources and need for repair, financial punishments should be inflicted(实施).(转折) Nevertheless, I would argue that sending such people to jail would be excessive unless they are unwilling to pay for their crime or are repeat offenders.
(复述作者立场)All in all, I am in favor of using community service as a punitive measure against people who damage public property. (总结分论点)In some cases, fines are reasonable. (复述作者立场与总结分论点)However, I do not think that jailtime is a humane way to respond to crimes of vandalism except in the most extreme cases.
