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2021年11月6雅思大作文题目
Many people use social media every day to get in touch with other people and know about news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
高分范文及解析
Introduction
It is very common to see people, be they youngsters or seniors, browsing social media platforms, such as TikTok and Facebook, to keep contact with others and get themselves well-informed. Personally, I deem this commonplace advantageous.
解析
比较老生常谈的社交媒体类话题。审题时需注意：and连接，因此考生需覆盖到社交媒体对两方面的影响：与人联系 & 获取信息。只点到其一就是偏题。
Body 1
Modern media provides its users with easier access to both their beloved ones and strangers by overcoming the geographic distance. <利用从句，点出反方观点的同时就反驳掉 Those who harbour prejudice toward social media and regard it as the factor of undermining face-to-face interaction are actually old-fashioned and even out of touch, since they picture the scenes decades ago when friends and family members contacted with each other by merely typing and receiving messages on a cold screen instead of talking face to face. In fact, things have changed with technologies booming unprecedentedly. Social media nowadays has made it possible for users to chat with each other in this virtual world just like the way they communicate in reality. In other words, it is through modern media that people are able to keep in touch by either video-chatting or uploading photos especially during the outbreak of pandemics.
解析
【解析】“让步+反驳”的框架回应第 一个方面——与人保持联系。
Ø harbour vt. 持有，怀有
Ø undermine vt. 逐渐削弱[损害]
Ø out of touch 脱节，孤陋寡闻
Ø picture vt. 想象
Ø boom vi. 繁荣，迅速发展
Body 2
As to news sources, social media also has an edge over traditional forms like newspapers. <先让一小步 Admittedly, compared with news shown on social media, which may be fabricated, the stories reported on newspapers are rather authentic, since the strict censorship requires editors to be certain about minute details. Social media users may be misled by some idle gossips, and even worse, accelerate the speed of spreading such fake news via modern platforms. <反驳 However, this can in effect be prevented as long as readers foster the ability to seek authoritative sources and to distinguish the information they have acquired. Moreover, taking full advantage of news events’ travelling fast on social media, readers and viewers can get informed via palm-sized gadgets within a few hours or even minutes rather than wait at least half a day until newspapers are printed.
解析
【解析】“让步+反驳”的框架回应第二个方面——获取信息。采用对比论证，将社交媒体与传统纸媒进行比较，突出社交媒体的好处。
Ø have an edge over sth. 比…更有优势
Ø fabricate vt. 编造，捏造
Ø authentic adj. 权威的
Ø censorship n. 审查
Ø minute adj. 细小的
Ø idle gossip 无中生有的小道消息
Ø palm-sized gadgets 巴掌大小的小器具
04
In a nutshell, the downsides of social media pale into insignificance when set against its upsides.
解析
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雅思写作 | 流程图 2：又一制作工序
* 非数据图：【流程图】
* 类型一：【制作工序】
# Introduction
Shown in the diagram is the procedure of making sugar from sugar cane. The process, seen in an overall view, is quite complex, consisting of multiple steps in which different machines are used.
* 第 一句话中下划线的部分是倒装现象，此时尤其注意动词的单复数由动词后的名词成分(才是真的主语)的单复数决定。
* 第二句中，动词的分词(句中为被动)作插入状语(表示主句陈述的事情以什么样的方式、条件、原因发生。这一句中，表方式。)第二句，陈述图的宏观情况，拿到内容分的同时拿到语法分(插入状语、伴随状语以及其中的定语从句)
# Body
First, it takes a minimum of 12 months and a maximum of 18 for sugar canes to ripen, and grown canes are harvested by eitherlaborersormachinery. The next step is crushing sugar canes into juice by the crushing machine, and then the juice is purified through the limestone filter. 至此，句子的主句已经多样了。后面还可以更多样： An evaporator is used at the following step, at which the purified juice becomes syrup as it is heated in the evaporator. 用器械/器皿等作为主语是不容易想到的，这个句子的可学性很高。Then, the syrup goes into the centrifuge, which separates sugar crystals from the syrup. 这一句和之前的一句用到了不一样的定语从句，也是丰富了作文中的语法现象，得语法分，请留意。Sugar crystals – the semi-product – need to dry and cool in a bucket and become the end product – sugar. 这一句中注意，dry和cool用的是不及物动词含义。
* 老章自然是要提醒注意高亮标出的词汇。
* 老章的这一段中的语法其实都是简单语法现象，但是句子读起来节奏是丰富的，主要得益于句子主语/开头的多样和丰富。
# Conclusion
In light of those steps, making sugar from sugar cane is a job of complexity, not only because of the many steps but also because of the need to use different pieces of equipment in each step. 这样的结尾段内容有一定的难度，但是可以学会。首先重申一下图的全貌，然后就这个图而言，可以解释一下是因为步骤多，并且每个步骤都有不一样的器械。这个套路是可以学会的，要学。
