支招雅思小作文 | 地图 某公园的过去与现在
4月16日雅思作文，新航道小编给大家火速带来，记收藏范文哦！观点类大作文，媒体类话题——
1.话题
More and more people use computers and other electronic devices to access information. Therefore, there is no need to use printed books, magazines, or newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目来源：2022年4月17日大陆雅思大作文（重复19年10月12日大陆考题）
题目大意
越来越多的人用电脑和电子设备获取信息。因此，没必要再用传统印刷书、杂志或报纸。同意还是反对？
2思路解析
这是一道观点类大作文，讨论的是传统印刷出版物的必要性。审题时要注意，题目观点给出了一个因果逻辑：“因为更多人用电子设备获取信息，所以传统印刷物没有必要了”，涉及到因果逻辑，我们可以判断“因”、“果”是否正确以及因果之间是否构成必然联系。这道题在必然性上存在漏洞，即电子设备使用变多≠纸质物没有存在意义，因此建议从反对角度切入。下面新航道给大家分析一些思路。
首先来看观点的合理部分。通过电子设备获取信息确实相比纸媒有优势。一方面获取信息的时效性更高，许多新闻一旦发生能立即在网上获得，而通过报纸往往需要半天甚至隔天才能知晓。另一方网上搜索需要的信息比查阅纸质出版物也更加方便。只需要将关键词输入搜索软件，仅需几秒钟我们就能获得大量相关内容，而查阅纸质书籍的话我们需要先知道相关书名和作家，找到对应书本后再花时间翻阅才能找到相应内容。
但是纸质出版物依然有需求和存在价值，是没有办法完全由电子设备取代的。对于老年人来说，他们无法熟练使用电子设备来查找和获取信息，纸质出版物是他们习惯用于获取信息的方式。对于贫穷地区的人来说，未必有足够的资金来购置电子设备，纸质出版物对他们来说成本会少很多。此外，有些人对阅读纸质书籍有独特的喜爱，他们会出于喜好持续购买。
3提纲
4高分范文示例
While it is an irreversible trend that people opt to obtain information from electronic devices like computers or smart phones, I do not think it means that there is no justification for printed media.
On the one hand, it is easy to understand why some people clamor for replacing paper media with electronic counterparts. It is true that a growing number of people, especially the younger generation, rely more on electronic gadgets like laptops or smartphones as major information sources due to the unprecedented convenience and efficiency. For example, today we can search for the coverages of a news event within seconds by inputting keywords on a webpage and download the results listed, whereas it used to take days in fumbling in old newspapers or magazines. In this sense, some people take it for granted that the printed publications do not deserve a place in this age dominated by electronic communications.
Despite the popularity of electronic way of reading, it does not automatically lead to the demise of traditional media: it is simple-minded to deny the old-fashioned forms solely because of the blossoming of new technology. Rather, the justification of printed media is a complicated issue that is correlated to specific needs of readers. For senior citizens who have difficulty dealing with smartphones or computers, newspapers or books remain an indispensable part of connecting them with the world. Even those who adapt to electronic reading methods may still choose to read newspapers at breakfast or are obsessed with the feeling of paper books just because of personal preference. The last factor we cannot afford to ignore is readers in less developed regions, who have no online channel of obtaining information to the newspapers.
In conclusion, while the popularity of portable devices has revolutionized the traditional way of reading, it looks to me that the printed media still play a part in terms of the various needs of the general public.
5相关词汇和语法结构
Irreversible 不可扭转的
Justification 正当的理由
Clamor 叫嚣
Unprecedented 前所未有的
Gadgets 小物件
Fumble 翻阅
Demise 消亡
Blossom 发展
Obsessed 痴迷的
Revolutionize 革新
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支招雅思小作文 | 地图 某公园的过去与现在
地图，选自《剑桥雅思真题集14》
Shown in the pair of maps are the original layout of the Grange Park and its current view. Overall, there have been evident changes.
* 表达程度的形容词，不仅仅有“大”、“小”。
* 选择合适的视角去写作：1)俯瞰/鸟瞰(“上帝”视角)对应“东南西北”;2)置身其中(“访客”视角)，对应“前后左右”和“东南西北”;3)混合视角，前两种视角混合。
建议用第2)种视角，更好写作。
* 不要依次写两张图，而是拿后一张图比较于第 一张图。
* 有些信息需要“模糊处理”。
Today, a visitor, entering the park through either the Eldon Street entrance or the Arnold Avenue entrance, will no longer find the fountain but instead immediately see a rose garden that is situated/positioned. in the central area of the park. In addition, there are seats surrounding the garden. As the visitor reaches the garden, he or she will find an amphitheater a few steps to the westas the replacement of themusical stage. Right next to the theater is another rose garden of a smaller size, which is the original garden near the north entrance. In addition, the rose garden on the south side and all the seats have been removed.
The area that is east of the central rose garden also has had a tremendous change. Where there used to be a glasshouse, there now is a water feature located in the southeast corner. Opposite it and across the park, a cafe and a children’s playground have replaced the aquatic plant pond and the rose garden. What is more, there is an additional underground car park, which provides another entrance for visitors, and it is in the immediate vicinity / proximity of the water feature.
* 注意时态：现在完成时。
* 主体部分的两个段落中，黄色高亮的部分值得注意：是把过往的情况容入到描述现在情况的句子中去写，很考验语法和句型的使用。
Overall, there have been evident changes in a number of places, and the park’s layout has been simplified.
* 对于地图的总述，就是写变化的大小。
