株洲雅思培训班网上哪个好,3月3日雅思大作文示范写作 | 个人信息存于网络的利弊

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雅思写作热门话题之——教育

  2022年3月3日雅思大作文题目

  Many people today put personal and private information online (address, phone number, and credit card number) to facilitate everyday activities, such as banking, shopping, and socialising. Is it a positive or negative development?

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Perhaps one of the most conspicuous impacts that the Internet has had on people’s daily life is the shift from tackling everyday trivialities at specialised brick-and-mortar places to online services, with their personal information put online. While some may view this as a detrimental and risky development, I tend to think otherwise.

  解析

  又与科技类话题相关,且与生活十分贴近,那我们的观点可以贴近事实去论述,站positive

  Ø conspicuous adj. 明显的

  Ø triviality n.[C] 琐事

  Ø specialised adj. 专门的

  Ø brick-and-mortar adj. 实体的

  Ø detrimental adj. 有害的

  Body 1

  Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to be concerned about the safety of such a trend. This is mainly because the Internet, which functions as an efficient medium for information spreading, offers anyone who can manipulate such technology access to hacking into others’ database where their personal and private information, such as addresses, phone numbers, and credit card numbers, is stored. The leakages of personal information thus may incur financial losses of people who lack the vigilance and are trapped in elaboratefraud. However, the above-mentioned issues will be properly addressed, since online platforms are already working on better systems to track and punish illegitimate hackers.

  解析

  让步+反驳:确实存在信息泄露的可能,进而造成更大的损失,但这个问题可以通过其他方法避免,比如:防泄漏技术的进步

  Ø function as vi. 起…作用

  Ø manipulate vt. 熟练操作

  Ø hack into vi. 侵入(他人的计算机系统)

  Ø leakage n. 泄露

  Ø vigilance n. 警惕(性)

  Ø elaborate adj. 精心制作的

  Ø fraud n. 诈骗

  Ø track vt. 搜寻,追踪

  Ø illegitimate adj. 非法的

  Ø hacker n. 黑客,私自使用[篡改](他人的)计算机资料的人

  Body 2

  As a matter of fact, storing personal information online is an inevitable trend, which indicates that behind such practice are more gains. The most evident one is that this development brings much convenience and improves working efficiency. In the past, there were either cases where consumers walked around in shopping malls the whole day to look for something eye-catching and compare prices or cases where clients spent a half of a day queuing in a bank to handle business activities. However, with the increasing busy lifestyle that the majority of people are forced to live nowadays, they do not have much time, and those everyday activities can actually be done by a single click on certain websites once netizens have put their information online. In this case, such a tendency suits today’s fast-paced life.

  解析

  正面论证:便利、效率高

  Conclusion

  In a nutshell, the cons of putting private information online pale into insignificance when set against the pros.

  解析

  重申观点

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雅思写作热门话题之——教育

有很多烤鸭抱怨,说没有一份系统的雅思写作话题作文题库。确实,刚接触雅思写作的小伙伴,可能只听说过几类常考的话题,比如:教育类、科技类、传统与文化类、政府类、环境类等,对其他的几类话题并没有那么了解。

因此,新航道将雅思写作的十大话题做了详细总结,由于内容较多,今天先给大家分享教育话题,新航道小编建议大家先收藏。

01教育应该包含哪些内容?

母题:It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions?

提示:本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会),准备好这篇文章,即可应付教育类话题中的最 大分支—教育的功能,做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度,可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开,对于个人,可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。

子题:

大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?要不要延长义务教育年限?

02学校的科目谁来选择?

母题:

Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

提示:

这类题目采取的策略就是双批判,因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

子题1:政府选课or老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?

子题2:只有学术科目重要,体育和音乐这样的课不重要,你同意吗?要不要学国际新闻?要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?

子题2与母题联系不大,需要准备这些科目各自的优点。

03什么样的教育方式最好?

母题:

Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

提示:

远程教育最 大的好处,就在于三个any:anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有体育课且久坐电脑前,会引发健康问题。

子题:

私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?

04谁来为学费买单?

母题:

Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (100731)

提示:

这些话题都有一个共同的特征:高等教育只对学生自己有好处,因此学生应当自行为高等教育买单。这类题目的写法非常有规律,先驳斥这种理由,再交代学生自己支付学费的后果就可以了。

子题:政府要为学生买单吗?(缺点是给政府带来经济负担,这类话题写法和其它政府类话题一样)

05孩子们要不要参加社会实践?

母题:

Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

提示:

gap year好处就是各种能力的锻炼,缺点就是容易受到社会恶习的影响,误入歧途。

子题:要不要参加无偿社会劳动?要不要毕业去农村锻炼?要不要从小远离父母居住?

以上就是今天分享的关于【教育】话题的全部写作解析了,大家可以根据新航道小编的提示,进行这些话题的写作练习哦~祝大家取得满意的雅思成绩!