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小伙伴们对英语中的各类时态肯定不陌生,但想在写作考试中正确使用它并不简单。今天就从雅思考试中的动态小作文入手,简单分析一下如何正确使用各种时态,以及怎样巧妙利用时态写出讨喜考官的句子来。
根据讲解需要制作简单绘制
首先我们假定,在考试中碰到的是这样一幅曲线图,展示的是1990到2030年蓝色和一些其他颜色汽车的销量。然后以此为例,按照写作顺序,重点分析如何正确地在句子使用各类时态的。
1、整体阐述:一般现在时 如果想要描述在1990年到2030年间,蓝色汽车是的,则往往使用一般现在时,例如: Blue cars are the most popular between 1990 and 2030.
2、细节凸显:一般过去时 读取蓝色汽车在1990年的销售量时,则要使用一般过去时,因为此时写的是一个孤立的过去的时间点上的数据,例如下面的句子:The sales of blue cars was 3,000 in 1990.
3、过去某段时间段:一般过去时 如果想要描述在1990年到2030年间,蓝色汽车是的,则往往使用一般现在时,例如: Blue carsare the most popular between 1990 and 2030.
4、未来预测:一般将来时 动态图的将来时态也是雅思写作着重考察的一部分,一般来说,在TASK 1中将来时有两种表达方式,一是上面提到的,使用will造句,例如:The sales of blue cars will grow steadily to 4,500 by/in 2030.
这里要注意,介词使用by或者in都是可以的。
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这里要注意的是,在问题3中,描述某段时间内的变化时,除了使用一般过去时之外,还会出现过去完成时的使用雅思考官,had done正是被考生遗忘在角落的一个时态。例如:The sales of blue cars had increased to 3,900 by 2010.
另外,还要注意介词by的使用,by在句子中的意思是到...为止或者在...之前,指的是在这个年份结束之前蓝色汽车的销量已经达到了3,900。
值得一提的是,在剑桥雅思真题的考官范文中,多数完成时态的句子都是搭配by来使用的。同理,如果想要表示蓝色汽车的销量在年,也就是今年,略微下降到3,700时,则可以使用by加现在完成时的句子,例如:The sales of blue cars has decreased slightly to 3,700 by .
如果需要描述蓝色汽车在将来的销量,也可以使用介词by加年份,但时态并不用将来完成时(will have done),而是使用一般将来时(will),例如:The sales of blue cars will grow steadily to 4,500 by 2030.
此外,利用下面的方式表达将来时也是考官所广泛使用的,例如:The sales of blue cars is expected/predicted to grow steadily to 4,500 in 2030.
以上就是在雅思小作文动态类题目中时态的使用。如果能够运用正确得当,TASK 1是可以获得加分的哦。建议大家可以多参考考官范文中时态的用法,平时练习时多加注意,这样才能在考试时随手写出漂亮的句子。


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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
