7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
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个人特点/兴趣爱好：为人友善，条理性强，乐观积极，爱好阅读，旅行，相信知识的力量会改变一个人的命运。
个人经历：通过对于教育的研究和西方工作经验，深刻的了解中西方文化下学生的不同以及造成的原因和影响。这一切对于未来的工作起到了很大的作用，更快更准的了解学生的需求，可以帮他们尽快的找到方向和达到目标。对于我而言，我认为老师是一个良心的活，它不仅仅只是只是那么简单，还是学生生命路程上的引导者和启发者。
小作文基本图形(线，柱，饼，表)分为动态图和静态图。动静态图在小作文的写作中是不同的思路，所以小伙伴在审题的件事就是先判定是动态图还是静态图。
如何断定动态图和静态图?
在题目中找寻时间点是一个年份，还是两年以上的时间段，若只有一个年份是静态图，两年以上的时间段是动态图
动态图：
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
静态图：
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
判定好动静态图，我们这一期先说一下动态图所需的词汇和句型。动态图主要是比较对象的数据趋势变化。这个比较分为对象内部和对象外部。
对象内部：在所给一段时间内，一个描述对象具体的变化情况。以上面动态图为例，the consumption of chicken的具体变化趋势就是缓慢地波动上升。
对象外部：在所给一段时间内，所有描述对象主要的趋势变化对比。以上面动态图为例，the consumption of chicken是总体上升，其他的都是总是下降。
了解了这部分后，我们先把动态图趋势的相关词汇和句式搞定，here we go!
波动：fluctuate (v.)/fluctuation(n.)
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写作知识点
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英语听力
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英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
