7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
雅思写作应该按照怎样的顺序做?一般在雅思写作的要求里面，都有哪些雅思写作题型呢?说真的仔细了解就发现没有多少了，而雅思写作最重要的不是题型了，而是我们在写作的时候如何合理的安排。
雅思写作应该按照怎样的顺序做?
一、理解题目
做到理解题目的个目的就是为了能够找到该topic中的核心词汇，写作的时候要严格围绕着该核心词(词组)组织文章，以免出现一些跑题的现象。其次就是为了能够将该词(组)在写作前直接进行同义代换(把你想用到的形式罗列出来，通常设置3个即可)，以便可以到用词多样化的目的。
二、构思
根据题目要求，要去确定本文的雅思写作题型到底是属于单边还是双边写法，还有应该需要通过几段来进行论述。
三、搜集论点和论据
此时可以把自己积累的优点、以及缺点罗列出来，是优缺点各自列4个，然后再去筛选一下自己留下优缺点最多各3个，包括论据。如果我们在搜集论据时发现某个论点很难找到论据，那么就应该要立即放弃该观点的使用，因为到你写起来的时候肯定会感觉更不顺畅。
四、句式要多样化
在写作的过程中，往往会因为时间紧张导致我们也紧张，于是写着写着就慢慢的写成了全篇只有宾语从句和定语从句，句式的变化就无从谈起。因此为了能够避免这一现象，小编强烈建议各位考生要去标注一下：定从、短语、倒装、虚拟。
一般雅思写作题型都有哪些呢?写好雅思作文的根本是什么呢?在做雅思写作的时候，我们要学会去做合理的规划。
雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
