7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
雅思写作需要注意扣分点!今天新航道小编为大家总结出雅思写作考试的扣分点，希望大家可以在平时练习的过程中多加注意。
雅思写作有的扣分点事实上与你的文章内容是没有关系的，但是却扣掉了分，但是这些问题就经常会出现在大家最容易忽略的地方，若大家不重视起来，所以考生想获得雅思写作就更难了，所以在这里老师要为大家分析雅思写作容易扣分的两个方面：单词缩写和格式。
一、雅思写作单词缩写问题
雅思写作的大小作文一般都是正式的学术文体，不论是在格式上或者是在语言上，国外的学习以及工作中写的论文、报告都不会使用缩写形式。但大多数考生会因为写高中作文、大学四六级作文时逐渐的养成了缩写的习惯，同时还把此习惯依然的运用到了雅思写作中，但是在雅思写作正式的文体中是不允许的。雅思写作中只有少数单词可采用缩写(如：CO2 for carbon dioxide; TV for television; e.g. for for example, 以及etc. for et cetera -等于and so on)，其他的缩写均不能采用。
二、雅思写作格式混乱问题
英文写作格式包含有两种，即齐头式和缩进式。一般齐头式由于顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行，因此还会给人以整洁的感觉，在这里还更加的推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式比较相似，相当于是每一段的开头句缩进，但是段落之间没有空行，所以不是很受欢迎。
大家经常都会在作文里看见同学们用的是齐头式+缩进式，相当于是段首句缩进+段落之间空行，这里考生们要注意，只有改变了自己的写作的方法，才有可能让自己在考试里获得雅思写作的。
以上就是小编为大家介绍的雅思写作容易扣分的两个方面，期望会对大家的备考有帮助，大家可以认真阅读上面的内容，争取再雅思写作中获得雅思。
雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
