7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
90%的考生都会中招的雅思写作误区：看看你中了几个?雅思考生经过长时间的练习之后觉得雅思写作并不难，只是想要考有些不容易，所以变出花似的在作文内容上下文章。想让作文变得阅读起来有深度有内涵，小编就来讲讲这样做对不对。
坑：作文字数越多分越高?
你想太多了!因为雅思作文是有字数限制的，你写的少也不行，那样会扣分。作文有大小两篇你写完两篇时间就是很紧张的事情了。你写多考官也不会给你辛苦分慰问你，而且如果你多写了几句，内容还出现错误，出现扣分情况就别说西瓜了芝麻你都捡不到了。所以还是老老实实根据评分标准写吧。
第二坑：词汇要多用?
小编翻遍了评分标准，只看到他强调了词汇的准确性，没有要词汇。不要想写又长又生僻的，考官看不懂就尴尬了。强行使用生僻的词汇会使句子语境变得牵强，效果极差。小编八字真经告诉你，写作做到用词简单自然，准确流畅就OK了。
第三坑：词汇替换能词汇丰富性?
考官考察的是学生是否能够用不同方式表达一个事情。如果只是随意地做替换，替换对了，那当然好，那错了，扣分是在所难免的了。丰富性是词汇的丰富，也是短语，句式的丰富，需多在短语和句式的丰富性上下功夫。
第四坑4：语法一点都不重要?
雅思写作评分标准里提到了对语法的要求。语法水平作为英语的根基，决定了你作文的基础分。语法都不对，句子能通吗?肯定会影响阅读体验，考官看了直摇头。得你就别想了，想你也得不到了，还是把基础打好再谈其他吧。
小编总结了坑人的写作方法：作文字数推成山，词汇也是泛滥成灾，词汇替换错看不懂，不问语法，长句生僻认不出等等。这些雅思写作的坑总是吸引着一个又一个考生。莫名的给他们这样写肯定得的自信 。小编言尽于此，考生自行把握，还有存在疑惑的地方，可以关注和在线咨询新航道哦!
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
