7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
新航道带你雅思写作上(小作文)提到雅思写作不知道可以让多少考生变得愁眉苦脸，考试前抱完佛教接着转发锦鲤，最后再拜杨超越，只求能考个6分以上就好。人看了各种经验贴后，觉得写作太难了，以至于考试还没开始就给自己写好了结局。今天就跟着小编将带领考生重拾信心，为雅思考试书写新结局。
一、稍微了解写作的都知道，雅思写作分为两部分，分别是大作文小作文。(大作文，250字以上，小作文50字以上)，考试时间共1小时，小编建议小作文20分钟，大作文40分钟。大作文分数比重更高，所以要重点对待。
二、开头改写题目。
开头千万不能照抄题目，因为开头是考官的印象，否则他会认为这篇作文就是和题目相似度太高的高仿品，导致好感度降低，就更不会有了，可以尽可能多的改写。
(1)改变词性。用同个词根的词，例如题目中出现名词consumption，可以替换成动词consume，或者替换成buy /use，具体动词要根据不同语境搭配。
(2)近义词替代。这是最直接最简单的方法，比如题目中出现spending，你替换成相同词性的近义词expenditure
(3)改变句式，主被动句的转换。
考试时可以从这3个角度思考，也可以相结合使用。
可以写个结尾总结，不过如果第二段已经写了overview，那么结尾可写可不写。或者，如果把第二段的overview放在结尾写，也是可以的。
三、备考注意事项
1. 找出雅思真题中的小作文，观察图标的类型，看懂题目意思、思考总体趋势overview。
2. .选取真题写作，运用摘录的方法和好词好句，反复修改。自己修改后，能再找比自己基础、写作能力更强的小伙伴修改或者是辅导班修改。根据评分标准做出相应修改，找出自身不足，并对其。
3. 研读考官范文，总结常用的动态图、静态图、地图、流程图的overview、重点数值选取、词汇、句型。
4.模考计时训练、修改、看范文、总结思考，最后总会水到渠成地。
5总结自身问题，回顾摘录的词句，对自己写的文章进行总结，形成私人资料库。
今天的新航道带你雅思写作上(小作文)的分享就到这里，后期小编还会分享关于备考上(大作文)的进行分享，可以关注和在线咨询新航道哦!
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
