7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
做事讲方法才是聪明的做法,而今天小编分享的是雅思G类小作文写法,G类和A类有很大区别,下面小编从雅思写作G类小作文考察哪些能力还有对考生要求等方面向考生们介绍雅思G类小作文写作方法。
一、雅思G类写作重点考察能力:
1.engage in personal correspondence
2.elicit and provide general and factual information
3.express need and wants, likes and dislikes
4.express opinions, etc.
二、雅思G类对考生的要求:
G类小作文对考生主要的要求就是合理联想,脑洞大开理论联系实际,想象下实际情况来做描述。我们以常见的投诉信为例,题目要求会给出主体内容,比如对旅行社的投诉,那么考生在雅思写作的时候其实需要去设想特定场景,有些考生会思维比较局限,比如单单描述导游的态度问题,这个时候问题来了,理由不充分且内容不充实。换句话讲,小作文更加看重的是效果,如果后读了你的信件,让考官觉得理应得到赔偿,这其实就达到目的了。
三、雅思G类小作文写法:
我们在写作的时候,要把理由想充分,比如我们可以从旅行安排与合同不符,比如过多的购物环节,这其实在跟团旅行中很常见。再比如住宿环境差或者餐饮问题,其实衣食住行都可以包含进去。这样再去投诉提要求才会显得比较合理。在信件的开始,要介绍清楚自己,投诉事由及当时感受等等。写清楚例如时间地点,对象内容等等。当然重要的后一段,要把自己的诉求建议,期望写清楚。比如希望得到赔偿或退换部分旅费,有关部门作出相关调整避免再次发生,或者要求道歉。但切记不要提过分无理的要求。
在计划证格式的基础上,不能降低对行文的要求。有些考生的误区是:移民类对书面语的要求较低,行文要求也随之降低。其实不是这样的,参考的考生想要的分数集中,想要在这些人中计划有优势需要的基本计划障,这就是格式和基本行文要求。在格式方面遵循书信基本格式就可以,注意开头和结尾的写法很重要,这是体现表达地道与否的关键部分哦。如开头的称谓一般使用dear开头,加上名字(given name)或直接写成Dear Sir or Madam或To whom it may concern等,在称呼后用逗号。签名处的落款也有的要求,如果在称呼处用的是Dear Mr.等,我们习惯在此处用Yours sincerely,如果是称呼Dear Sir or Madam,我们一般就会用Yours faithfully结尾。如果和收信人关系较为亲密,Yours, With love等甚至直接留下名字都是可以接受的。
不同的信件写法不同语气不同,所用的词汇也不尽相同,充分了解各类信件的特点,找准格式摸清重点,学会随机应变才行。雅思G类小作文写作方法小编就分享到这里,如果还有问题考生们可以关注新航道的其他资讯,或者在线联系新航道老师获得更直接的答案。
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.