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西安莲湖区雅思培训学费一般多少,雅思写作提分技巧汇总!
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

　雅思写作提分技巧汇总!雅思写作提分技巧汇总!众所周知雅思写作部分是分为大作文和小作文，大家都是知道具体题型，下面新航道小编就为大家讲讲雅思写作提分技巧，希望大家可以学以致用。

　　1. 内容切题，丰富

　　内容首先要做到切题，审题时要找准主题，看准在这个主题下所提出的问题，这样才能确定文章的主旨和自己的立场。在文章的题目中要显示出文章的中心词，你是围绕哪个题目来写的这篇文章。关于自己的立场，则是针对主题提出的问题的回答，作为主题句。一般主题句放在文章的首段，你给出的理由即论点放在中间段的首句，中间段论点的后面则是根据此论点给出的论据。论点要两到三个，这样才显得充分。最后一段是总结。一般的文章需要包括引言(introduction)、主体(body)和结论(conclusion)。引言要涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句，主体则要包括足够的论点和论据，结论可以重申观点、提出建议。结论四到五句即可。

　　2. 上下文的连贯性和词汇的准确生动

　　上下文的连贯性不仅要通过内容来表达，还需要一些连词作为过渡。大家要掌握好连词的用法，准确表达出自己的意思。词汇的多少和篇幅的长短不能衡量一篇文章的好坏，但用词的系统性重要。一般来说词汇的准确表达可以在两个方面多下工夫，一是在用词的难度，二是在近义词的使用。用词不是越难越好，但是为了表达的更加生动，使用一些难度高，地道的表达会给文章添彩。写文章时跳出思维定式，使用一些不会为大多数人所使用的近义词，也会给考官耳目一新的感觉。

　　3. 时态的准确性和长句的使用

　　雅思口语中注重的表达的性和直接透彻。而在写作时就要兼顾文章的正式性。一篇正式的文章在时态和句子结构上面要注意，句子结构的准确性涉及主谓一致、句子平衡性等问题。在写文章的时候谓语动词与主语的搭配需要特别注意，不要写的句子太长而把真正的主语给忘记了。再就是句子不要写的头重脚轻，每个句子主体的长度需要平衡一下。并不是每个句子都写得很长很复杂，文章就是好文章，如果整篇文章都是长难句，考官也会觉得很厌烦，文章里面句子有长有短，才能让人看得既不疲惫就能读出文章的内涵。

　　写作是一个长期积累的过程，虽然有一些很不错的模板，但也需要大家多多摸索总结，争取让自己的雅思成绩取得进一步的。

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

年7月17雅思大作文题目

　　Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.

　　【解析】

　　integral part 不可或缺的部分

　　censure 谴责v.

　　one-sided 片面的adj.

　　Body Paragraph 1

　　The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.

　　【解析】

　　ascribe … to … 归咎于

　　marketing pitch 市场营销

　　entice 怂恿 v.

　　on impulse 一时冲动

　　Body Paragraph 2

　　To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.

　　【解析】

　　evoke 唤醒 v.

　　psychological appeals

　　controversy 争议 n.

　　Body Paragraph 3

　　My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.

　　【解析】

　　introduce 引入v.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.

　　【解析】

　　prepare a ground for 为…打基础

　　affirm 断言v.

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