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重庆永川区雅思培训班哪家靠谱,一文拯救你的雅思写作Task 2，大作文终于不用凉了!
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

分享雅思考试大作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。

　　雅思大作文题目

　　Some people believe that the purpose of education is to produce good citizens and workers for society. Other, however, think the purpose of education is to help young people achieve their personal ambitions.

　　Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.

　　写作思路解析

　　In the modern society, education is viewed the basement of country development, even the basic education is free or very low expense in most of countries. <<< 意思离题较远。应该依托题目的立意来写句： For some people, particularly people fromunprivileged backgrounds, education is the ladder leading to a higher socioeconomical status. <<< 暗示了题目中的 personal ambitions，习惯性地把要反驳的放在前面说，然后反驳：However, is that the true mission of education in those countries? <<< 问句是一种措辞技巧，因为没有直说，所以可以吸引读者的阅读注意力。接下来，回答自己的提问：In fact, education is to serve a society as a whole and tocultivate civilized and productive citizens. <<< 注意语法点：动词不定式表目的，正好符合题目讨论purpose(目的)的需要。

　　Obviously, a good breeding and education is important and helpfulto for achieve personal success attainment, especially to for youngpersons people. For example, when young persons people begin to find work seek employment, the first impression may be given by status of their educational background, such as the level of education, the score in the institute and so on most employers look for the applicants’ educational experiences before they read other descriptions. <<< 体会这句话的想法的巧妙，没有直说成教育背景是打动雇主的项。More importantly In addition, the professional knowledge is useful to get better achievement. there are many cases of success in which those who have met personal ambitions are well-educated. <<< 故意把道理反过来推，逻辑是因为许多成功人士是接受过良好教育的，所以教育是为了实现个人成功的，这个逻辑明显有漏洞，有漏洞就对了，正好接下来反驳： However, education may facilitate the actualization of one’saspirations, but it serves missions that are more important.

　　Compared to the personal ambitions, the advantage service of education is bigger, to for cultivate a society well-behaved and capable nation <<< 题目中的good可以理解为well-behaved, 题目中的workers可以理解为capable的人. A little improvement on every person will cause huge enhancement on society. <<< 这个信息多余。Firstly,good culture education can produce nice citizens, <<< 等于什么都没说呀。and nice citizens form harmonious society, which produces more nice citizens again. 从教育的普遍性切入：nearly every citizen of a nation goes to school. In other words, education touches and enlightens nearly every soul <<< 对应good，因为好人内心善良 and mind <<< 对应workers，因为工作的人总得有点头脑 and only education can have such anextensive effect. Since this is an exclusive advantage of education, education must be responsible for the entire community as a whole. Secondly, good technology education can train the professional workers, and these workers can make perfect produces, and they can get higher payment and richer livers. Besides, the improvement of whole quality of all people is also the result of education, which is good at learning work technology, improving art cultivation and understanding the policies of countries. <<< 内容偏向了教育能做什么，而不是为什么应该做什么，需要重新考虑，比如时间： In addition, citizens are not born to be well-behaved and productive; instead, it takes years for a country to cultivate good and capable citizens. It is only education that has the time and patience. Education lasts a long-enough period, usually continuing until an individual’s twenties <<< 分词伴随状语. It is also available at any point of a lifetime. For example, there are institutions of increasing levels – primary and secondary schools and universities, and nearly twenty years of a person are spent in these programs.

　　The most education institutes are created by the social institutes or the countries, <<< 是文章主体部分没有提及的新内容，不可以。 and the service object is the common people, so the purpose of education is for social advantage. Although the education can help young people to achieve their ambitions, Educational institutions can indeed lead young individuals to personal success. However, education is not that simple. The most purpose is for society more significant. <<< 笼统总结，内容不要太详细，措辞处理一下就好。

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

年7月17雅思大作文题目

　　Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.

　　【解析】

　　integral part 不可或缺的部分

　　censure 谴责v.

　　one-sided 片面的adj.

　　Body Paragraph 1

　　The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.

　　【解析】

　　ascribe … to … 归咎于

　　marketing pitch 市场营销

　　entice 怂恿 v.

　　on impulse 一时冲动

　　Body Paragraph 2

　　To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.

　　【解析】

　　evoke 唤醒 v.

　　psychological appeals

　　controversy 争议 n.

　　Body Paragraph 3

　　My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.

　　【解析】

　　introduce 引入v.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.

　　【解析】

　　prepare a ground for 为…打基础

　　affirm 断言v.

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