7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
最让雅思学者头疼的就是雅思写作,同学都在雅思写作丢分,雅思写作怎么积累呢?小编为大家整理了关于雅思写作怎么积累的相关资讯,希望可以帮助到大家。
首先对于往年考试的积累。 相信已经众所周知了,雅思考试历年来的考题都是会重复出现的,所以,建议大家可以去把以前考过的题目全部都整理起来,然后再去针对题目进行针对性的训练,但同时要把思考的结果记录在笔记上。
另外,如果你经过努力依然不知道该如何去提出观点,那小编建议大家可以错读一些范文,通过例文去积累一些思想,这样大家再次遇到同类型题目的时候,就大概能知道该写些什么了
其次对于考题材料上面的积累 , 雅思考试都是比较注重逻辑的,并且还比较关注我们提出的各个段落能够支撑我们的观点,因此,希望大家在平时的学习过程中可以多去积累一些论点和论据方面的内容,例如,你们可以在平时的阅读训练中去有倾向性的收集论点,论据,以及那些例子方面的内容,并且如果你的基础比较好,那建议你还可以尝试去写英文日记,这样把英语放到平时的生活当中去是不过的方法。
除去针对于考题素材的积累,当然也要英语词汇、语法的积累,在雅思写作中考察学生的词汇语法能力以及复杂句的使用,因此烤鸭们如果词汇量少或者语法差要强加练习以及阅读范文进行学习。
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1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
(1)高中水平或雅思5分水平,基础薄弱的学生
(2)基础语法不完备,对雅思没有系统了解的学生
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2.课程亮点
(1)1V1定制课程,基础到强化循序渐进。
(2)师资力量雄厚,升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
(3)顾问1V1全方位指导,制定专属学习计划
(4)使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
(5)实体教学环境,沉浸式高效学习

课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
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英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型,目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握,考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。

英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习,每位学生能写出内容充实,在此基础上,掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧,写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。

学习收获
现报名可打八五折
(仅限前100名学员)
(1)课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估,量身打造课程,帮助学生充分完成课前预习
(2)课中导师双语沟通,进行雅思题型总结,对原版真题进行知识点精讲
(3)课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试,班主任线上线下24小时答疑

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.






