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2022年04月27日 00:34

德州雅思培训机构哪家好机构排名,支招雅思小作文 | 一张“集大成”的流程图
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

注意观察：这张“制作工序”类型的流程图，却有着“生命循环”类型流程图的关键特点之一：循环

The diagram illustrates the generation of electricity in a plant that uses hydraulic power. 总述时就说流程复杂还是简单： Overall, the production is hardly a complex process but rather simple, as it goes through a few steps and equipment.

由于这张流程图有着“日夜循环”这个特点，于是我们就以“白天和黑夜”为逻辑来写作，先一段就只描述日间的情况，后一段就只描述夜间的情况：

The whole production follows a day-and-night cycle. 条线清晰、条理清楚、读者最喜欢的行文结构就是 “总—分”结构没错了Water of the river is collected in the high-level reservoir created by the dam. During the day, water flows through the intake and via a tube down to the apparatus that has reversible turbines, whose spinning drives the generator at the power station. As the generator is turned on, it works to produce electric power, which is transmitted via the power lines to the national grid that delivers electricity to households. The water meanwhile goes to the low-level reservoir and is stored.

这里分段，吻合我们一开始确定下来的a day-and-night cycle这个逻辑。

During the night time, water in the low-level reservoir is pumped back by the reversible turbines and goes through the same route. It is stopped at the intake, which is closed at night, and waits until the next day for water from the high-level reservoir.

7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?

年7月17雅思大作文题目

　　Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.

　　【解析】

　　integral part 不可或缺的部分

　　censure 谴责v.

　　one-sided 片面的adj.

　　Body Paragraph 1

　　The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.

　　【解析】

　　ascribe … to … 归咎于

　　marketing pitch 市场营销

　　entice 怂恿 v.

　　on impulse 一时冲动

　　Body Paragraph 2

　　To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.

　　【解析】

　　evoke 唤醒 v.

　　psychological appeals

　　controversy 争议 n.

　　Body Paragraph 3

　　My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.

　　【解析】

　　introduce 引入v.

　　Conclusion

　　In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.

　　【解析】

　　prepare a ground for 为…打基础

　　affirm 断言v.

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