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2022年12月26日 14:53

　　Depicted in the line graphs are the changing number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney and the changes in the punctuality rate of this mode of transport. The period of 1995 to 2004 is investigated.

　　倒装结构

　　be动词使用(主谓一致)

　　核心词汇替换【punctuality n. 准时，守时】

　　As is shown in the first graph, the number of passengers going by train was within a narrow range of around 250 million to 300 million. To specify, there was a marginal 50-million growth between 1995 and 2001 before a moderate decline was found until 2004.

　　段落结构——总-分【笼统-具体】

　　程度修饰词的使用

　　More noticeable changes occurred in the performance of trains arriving on time. Starting from nearly 90%, the proportion of trains which arrived on time jumped to the peak at higher than 95% in both 1999 and 2002. the targeted level at which the trains were expected to achieve, before plummeting to approximately 70%, the all-time low throughout the given period.

　　段落结构——总-分【笼统-具体】

　　程度修饰词的使用

　　动词的现在分词(作状语)

　　同位语成分(其中包含定语从句)

　　To sum up, the increase in the number of train passengers was the general trend, while the problem of delayed trains became worse than ever before.

雅思培训基础班

1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生

课程简介

2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习

课程整体介绍

阅读知识点

听力知识点

口语知识点

写作知识点

核心词汇拓展

雅思写作知识点(163)

Some countries have spent a large amount of money in bicycles.

　　Why has this happened? Is it the best way to solve traffic problems?

　　混合文题型，问原因和同意与否。老话题，和交通堵塞相关

　　【审题】第二问出现极端词best, 往往站对立面：只要对比论证，有一种方法比题干方法好，题干方法就不是best

　　【上文回顾】前两期，我们分别从<个人和<社会层面，解释为何国家投资自行车，在「社会层面」中，提及自行车可以缓解交通堵塞和环境问题。因此，在回答第二问，提出新方法进行对比论证时，也要保证它既有其他优点，同时也满足缓解前两个问题。

　　【段落示范】【议论-论点1】

　　1. However, such a policy is far from perfection, which indicates that behind it are several flaws.

　　总起句：投资自行车有弊端(上文投资自行车的原因中，已经涉及其好处，因此议论段不再赘述，直接指出瑕疵)。

　　2. To start, for most citizens, never is cycling the first option of transport.

　　论点1：对于大多数人，自行车出行不现实。

　　3. This is mainly because the commuting distance has been widened owing to the progresses of urbanisation, with either instances where factories have been moved to the outskirts or instances where people dwell in remote areas in which the houses and flats are more affordable.

　　详述不现实的原因由于城市化进程，通勤距离变长。

　　4. Naturally, it is unrealistic for them to choose cycling as the mainstream of transport, and in contrast, bettering the public transit, such as opening more metro lines, is much more pragmatic.

　　「对比论证」公共交通更便捷，同时满足缓解交通堵塞与环境问题。

　　【解析】

　　1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 ***

　　见文中批注。

　　2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 ***

　　见文中批注。

　　3. 词汇(Lexical Resource)

　　far from perfection，意思是远不是完美无瑕。归类于通用词。

　　flaw为可数名词，意思是瑕疵。归类于通用词。

　　outskirts为可数名词，意思是(市镇的)边缘地带;市郊。归类于话题高频词。

　　dwell为不及物动词，意思是居住。归类于通用词。

　　affordable 为形容词，意思是支付得起的。归类于通用词。