10月29日雅思大作文示范写作 | 每个人都应该在学校待到18岁
分享雅思考试小作文真题范文。每一篇范文都经由专业团队反复校对，最终外教审查定稿。成功就是日复一日那一点点小小努力的积累。
线图 2022.10.29真题
The graph below shows the number of days spent on making a new car in four companies from 1998 to 2006.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the time consumed in the process of manufacturing a new car in four companies between 1998 and 2006.
[首段写作注意：1. 突出线图的变化; 2. 词汇替换]
BMW is most noteworthy, as there was a distinct trend. Despite a slight dip between 2000 and 2002, the days allotted in the whole production soared to 45 days in 2006, 20 days longer than that in 1998.
[主体段 1: 1. 数据分组 1: BMW: 唯一一个用时减少的公司; 2. 词汇使用—程度修饰词+描述变化的动词/名词; 3. 从句使用]
By contrast, the remaining three companies, Toyota, Ford and VW, all improved the efficiency in car manufacturing, represented by several declines in the manufacturing time. To specify, similar development could be found in both Ford and VW, whose consumption of time dropped consistently from 50 days to 35 days and from 36 days to 18 days respectively before remaining stable between 2004 and 2006. In addition, as for Toyota, although the period of 1998 to 2002 witnessed its 6-day marginal growth, the figure fell to 30 days afterwards, echoing that for Ford between 2002 and 2004.
[主体段2: 1. 数据分组 2: Toyota, Ford, VW: 用时增长的三个公司;同时，细化对比三个公司的工时;2. 词汇使用—程度修饰词+动词;3. 伴随状语(V-ing和V-ed形式)+从句使用]
Overall, the time of new car production varied from company to company and from year to year.
雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
10月29日雅思大作文示范写作 | 每个人都应该在学校待到18岁
年10月29日雅思大作文题目
Everybody should stay at school until 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (/10/29)
范文及解析
Introduction
Living in a society inundated with ferocious competition, young people in modern age are expected to be highly educated and qualified. Accordingly, the proposal to raise the school leaving age until the age of eighteen is propounded, which sparks vigorous contentiousness . While some people have a few reservations, I find myself in staunch agreement with such a movement.
解析
这次的task2又是一道典型的旧题，虽然整体难度并不大，题目中绝对化的限定词everybody也需要关注;可以通过对比讨论让所有年轻人18岁前全日制学习的好处和坏处来展开全文;
Ø inundated with 充斥着;充满
Ø ferocious adj.激烈的;强烈的
Ø accordingly adv. 因此
Ø propound v.提出;提议
Ø contentiousness n.争论;争议
Ø have a few reservations v.持有保留意见
Body 1
Beyond all doubt, ploughing into the study under 18 ,young people are more likely to obtain certain qualifications, laying a solid foundation for their future career prospect. With excellent academic environment and abundant teaching resources in schools, by no means would the students fail to concentrate on the study. In this case, most high school graduates would enjoy strong probability to further their advanced studies in universities and seek for a decent job with their credentials. By this token, attending schools for a longer period of time is definitely a wise investment for the young themselves.
解析
18岁前接受教育可以帮助学生为将来就业打好基础;良好的学习环境，优质的教育资源必然可以让学生更专注于学习，毕业之后更多的人才有机会接受高等教育，找到体面的工作;这样看来，在学校学习对学生来说就是一个很明智的投资;
Ø beyond all doubt adv. 毫无疑问地;
Ø plough into v.投入;
Ø by no means adv.绝不;
Ø further v.推进;
Ø credentials n. 文凭;凭证;
Ø by this token adv.由此看来
Body 2
Additionally, a mandatory policy for students to stay in school until at least they are eighteen , in large part, boosts the social harmony . Adolescence is a special period, in which young people,with immature minds, tend to lack self-control and the ability to distinguish right from wrong. Apart from imparting knowledge for its own sake, teachers also play an indispensable role in helping students instill correct moral values and become law-abiding citizens. Without judicious preparations and code of ethics to support and restrain themselves, the young, in all likelihood, will engage in anti-social behaviors .
解析
强制学生18岁前接受教育也有助于促进社会和谐稳定;青少年处在一个特殊的成长阶段，他们心智不成熟，缺乏自控能力不能辨别对与错;如果没有充足的准备和正确的价值观，他们很有可能会走上犯罪的道路;
Ø boost v.促进
Ø judicious preparations 充分准备;
Ø in all likelihood 极有可能;
Body 3
Nonetheless, such a strategy does come with its own dark sides,which fails to take into account the actual desires and rights of students, those who are not academically proficient and enthusiastic in particular. Rather than trapping them in a compulsive education system, it is better for them to climb into society, which allows them to gain social experience beforehand and become economically independent. Meanwhile, longer-term of obligatory education is bound to aggravate the ongoing financial burden of the government for high demanding in school facilities and faculty recruitment.
解析
但是，强制性的教育体系也有着一定的不足。一方面，有部分学生可能学生成绩并不理想，没有学习的激情，与其把他们圈在学校中，还不如让他们提早踏入社会，获取社会经验实践技能，慢慢地变得经济独立;另一方面，义务教育时间延长在一定程度也会增加政府的经济负担;
Ø take into account v.考虑到
Ø proficient adj. 精通的
Ø climb into society v.进入社会
Ø is bound to 必然会;一定会
Conclusion
To recapitulate, to seek an ideal mode of education is one of the mission in our time. Encouraging all teenagers to accomplish the secondary school until 18, from my perspective, is a win-win situation for both adolescents and the whole society.
解析
延长义务教育时间直到学生18岁，整体来看，对于学生和社会来说是双赢的!
Ø win-win situation 双赢的局面;
