7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
2021年1月30雅思大作文题目
More and more plastic waste is polluting cities, countryside and oceans.
What problems does it cause? What are the solutions?
范文及解析
01、Grocery bags, water bottles, and plastic straws, with a lifespan of mere minutes, can visiblypersist in the environment for centuries. Some of them have been dealt with properly, but many more are not.
解析
Ø 解析：三言两语做好转述
Ø a lifespan of mere minutes 使用寿命仅几分钟
Ø persist 存留
02、There is a clear connection between plastic trash and human health. The dumped trashes, in most cases, either wind up in landfills, contaminating the groundwater, or are incinerated, emitting toxins into the air. This can ultimately sicken people, think immune system damage and respiratory illness. The ubiquitous plastic waste has also had a life-threatening side effect on wildlife. Marine animals are those suffering the most, some of which, like sea turtles, are easily suffocated due to the entanglement with plastic ropes and nettings. Their mistakingplastic debris for prey, at the same time, is nothing new now.
解析
Ø 后果1：威胁人类健康
Ø 后果2：威胁野生生物的生存
Ø wind up 结束
Ø landfill 填埋地
Ø contaminate 污染
Ø incinerate 焚烧
Ø sicken 使…生病
Ø respiratory illness 呼吸疾病
Ø ubiquitous 无处不在的
Ø a life-threatening side effect 威胁生命的负面影响
Ø suffocate 窒息
Ø entanglement 缠绕
Ø mistake … for … 将某物误当作
Ø be nothing new now 屡见不鲜
03、Noticing the challenges created by the mismanaged plastic waste, both individuals and government should drive changes to avoid the pollution crisis spiraling out of control. For every individual, little changes can make a difference. It could be accomplished with bringing reusable bags to grocery stores or refusing the unnecessary single-use chopsticks in restaurants, which can to large extent cut the plastic consumption. More importantly, for the government, it is its responsibility to teach every household how to separate their plastic waste, and it is its unshakable duty to implement waste collection and invest in recycling technologies. If it goes smoothly, the discarded plastics are able to be reused to make new products.
解析
Ø 应对措施1：个人如何做
Ø 应对措施2：政府如何做
Ø mismanaged 处理不当的
Ø drive changes 推动改变
Ø out of control 失控
Ø unshakable duty 不可推卸的责任
Ø discard 丢弃
04、In light of the above, living in the world swimming with plastic waste, both human and wildlife suffer. In the face of this crisis, individuals and government should wake up, trying everything they can to stop the use of plastic at source or improve the recycling rate.
解析
Ø 结尾做好总结，表达方式稍作替换
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
