7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
雅思作文句型中十种转折句你掌握了吗?考鸭们都知道雅思作文中词汇是加分项,但是同学们也要合理的运用,运用的不好也是适得其反。下面小编给大家整理了关于雅思写作句型中需要掌握的十种转折句。
雅思句型1:In view of the above-mentioned negative factors/disadvantage(s)/defects in A, people's second thought is to...
(e.g. In view of the above-mentioned negative factors in raising the output, our second thought is to improve the quality of products.)
1 根据上面提到的A的负面因素/不利因素/缺陷,人们另一个想法是…
例:根据上面提到的产量的负面因素,我们的另一个想法是产品质量。
雅思句型2: To counter/offset/counteract/cancel undesirable/side/ill effects/influence/results of A, B is put forward/proposed/advanced as another better course/ solution to...
(e.g. To counter the undesirable effects of rigid administration, emotional investment is advanced as another better course to success in business.)
2 为了对抗/抵消/取消A的不良/负面影响/结果,B被提出作为对…的另一个的做法/解决办法。
例:为了对抗管理僵化的不良影响,感情投资被提出作为商业成功的另一个的做法。
雅思句型3: In their efforts to battle against dark side/incongruous elements A has brought along with it, however, people come up with another approach/solution/course to...namely...
(e.g. In their efforts to battle against the dark side the examination-oriented education has brought along with it, educators come up with another approach to the problem, namely the quality-oriented education.)
3 然而,人们努力对抗A所带来的负面/不和谐因素,提出了另一个方法/解决办法/做法…即…
例:为了努力消除考试教育带来的不良的一面,教育工作者对这一问题提出了另一途径,即素质教育。
雅思句型4:In contrast with the drawbacks/demerits/flaws of A, B can serve as a better step/move/advance in the right direction/toward the solution for the problem of...
(e.g. In contrast with the drawbacks caused by nuclear power, the solar power can serve as a better move toward the solution for the problem of energy crisis.)
4 与A的缺点相比,B对解决…的问题在正确的方向上更进了一步。
例:与核电的缺点相比,太阳能可作为的办法来解决能源问题。
雅思句型5:So when it comes to an effective remedy for/a good counter-balance to the problems/limits/faults/weaknesses in A, people naturally think of B.
(e.g. So when it comes to an effective remedy for the weaknesses in competition, people naturally think of cooperation.)
5 当谈到对A的问题/局限/错误/弱点的有效补救/平衡,人们自然就想到了B。
例:因此当谈到竞争的坏处的有效补救时,人们自然就想到了合作。
雅思句型6: But it has also brought along with it the negative effect/disadvantage/weakness that...
6 但它也同时带来了…的负面效应/不利因素/弱点。
雅思句型7:However, it is not without limits/problems/faults/defects, for example...
7 然而并非没有限制/问题/瑕疵/缺点,例如…
雅思句型8:Like anything else, it also has its own dark side, as evidenced in...
8 如同其他任何事物一样,它也有不好的一面,…就是明证。
雅思句型9:For/Despite/In spite of the advantages/benefits/positive effects A has, it has suffered from/posed some disadvantages/harm/negative effects.
9 尽管A具有优势/好处/正面效应,它却有一些坏处/危害/负面效应。
雅思句型10:To attain this goal, however, we still have much work to do/many obstacles to remove.
10 然而为了能达到这一目标,我们仍有工作要做/障碍要消除。
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7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.






