7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
如何准备雅思写作!今天新航道小编为大家准备了一篇关于雅思写作中小作文的备考方法，希望大家可以认真学习并加以使用。
首先让我们来了一下雅思小作文的类型：主流类与非主流类。主流类指曲线图、柱状图、饼状图和表格图，非主流类指流程图、示意图和地图。针对不同的型，考生要掌握不同的写作技巧。
其次了雅思小作文评分标准： TA (Task Achievement)(任务完成); C&C(Coherence and Cohesion)(连贯与衔接); LR(Lexical Resource)(词汇资源); GR&A(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)(语法范围与精确)。因此，考生练习时要从这四个方面出发，丰富自己的写作内容。
再次具备的语法基础
雅思小作文写的好与坏很大程度上决定于语法。语法与词汇一样，是备考雅思考试必不可少的一项。在雅思小作文写作中，准备语法可以从两方面着手准备，一是句型，二是时态。不论写作的要求是什么，这两点是必须要熟练掌握的。在雅思小作文写作中，考生不要使用过于复杂的句式，那样只会增加写作难度，从而耽误写作时间。因此，简单明了的叙述又能突出小作文的亮点，才会为小作文加分。
最后逻辑性
任何一篇文章没有好的逻辑思维、结构框架不清晰、任谁都是抓不住中心思想的，在备考雅思阅读考试的时候，通过大量的阅读素材考生不仅要扩充背景知识，还要学会分文章结构，文章中心思想，段落是如何布局的，段与段之间通过什么样的方式完美衔接的等等，这些都能为写作奠定的基础。除此之外范文也对小作文的写作有所帮助，但是不要一字一字的背诵，这是没有多大用处的。考生要学会灵活运用里面漂亮的句型这会为写作加分。
一篇作文的写作需要花足够的时间去磨练，坚持就是胜利相信自己可以在雅思写作考试中取得优异的成绩。
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雅思培训基础班
1.课程适合人群/适用阶段
（1）高中水平或雅思5分水平，基础薄弱的学生
（2）基础语法不完备，对雅思没有系统了解的学生
（3）即将进入雅思课程，希望尽早熟悉雅思考题的学生
课程简介
2.课程亮点
（1）1V1定制课程，基础到强化循序渐进。
（2）师资力量雄厚，升学指导团队的平均教龄8年以上
（3）顾问1V1全方位指导，制定专属学习计划
（4）使用原版真题和九天独家辅导资料
（5）实体教学环境，沉浸式高效学习
课程整体介绍
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阅读知识点
听力知识点
口语知识点
写作知识点
核心词汇拓展
相关题型分类练习
英语听力
听力常作为一种考试题型，目的在于考察应试者对英语语言的把握，考察考生对英语日常交流的理解能力;通常有听对话选择答案、听句子默写关键字词几种形式。
英语写作
通过本课程的系统学习，每位学生能写出内容充实，在此基础上，掌握撰写毕业论文的基本技能。要熟练掌握提纲及提要和读书报告的撰写技巧，写作速度大约平均在每小时200-300词。
学习收获
现报名可打八五折
（仅限前100名学员）
（1）课前顾问对学生学习能力1对1评估，量身打造课程，帮助学生充分完成课前预习
（2）课中导师双语沟通，进行雅思题型总结，对原版真题进行知识点精讲
（3）课后完成多样化作业并进行学术测试，班主任线上线下24小时答疑
7月17日雅思大作文示范写作 | 广告意在推销非必需品吗?
年7月17雅思大作文题目
Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve the sales of products that people do not really need.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
Introduction
Advertising has been an integral part of our economic and social life now. However, as a powerful technique of promoting sales, it has been censured by some people for its “main aim”: to encourage shoppers to buy unnecessary goods. I tend to think that this view presents a very one-sided picture of advertising.
【解析】
integral part 不可或缺的部分
censure 谴责v.
one-sided 片面的adj.
Body Paragraph 1
The commentary is understandable that advertising creates unconscious desires. People holding this view may ascribe their over-consumption to advertisers’ exaggerated claims of their marketing pitches, which means advertising puts goods in a positive light, creating unrealistic expectations, all for the benefit of selling. Enticed by these messages, consumers would buy goods of little or no value to themselves on impulse, be it a new cell phone or a massage armchair.
【解析】
ascribe … to … 归咎于
marketing pitch 市场营销
entice 怂恿 v.
on impulse 一时冲动
Body Paragraph 2
To persuade potential customers through evoking their psychological appeals, indeed, is one objective of advertising. However, I would argue that there is a controversy in what constitutes necessities versus non-essentials. This ambiguous notion is changing, along with the change in generations. To explain, what seems nonessential now – a massage armchair, for example – may fulfill its function years later, whereas what seems required now – a cell phone, for example – may soon lose its value if operating systems suddenly upgrade.
【解析】
evoke 唤醒 v.
psychological appeals
controversy 争议 n.
Body Paragraph 3
My firm conviction is that the real objective of advertising is to promote effective communication between producers and consumers. When a new product is to be introduced in the market, producers create memorable advertising campaigns that boost brans recognition, from which potential customers can be informed more about product advantages and know what suits their requirements and budget. Not only that, advertising helps maintain the demand for existing products and services.
【解析】
introduce 引入v.
Conclusion
In conclusion, I would say that the main aim of advertising is to prepare a ground for the sales of products, but we cannot affirm that the promoted goods are unnecessary.
【解析】
prepare a ground for 为…打基础
affirm 断言v.
